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ChaMdOdharmamu

kavitvaM puTTina nATinuMDi — kAmavaSamulaina krauMchamithunaMlOni pOtupakshini nirdAkshiNyaMgA nishAduDu vadhiMpagA EkAkiyai vilapiMchE peMTipakshipOrunu chUchi dayArdra hRyAvESaparipUrituDaina Adikavi vAlmIkinOTa aprayatnaMgA veDalina “mA nishAda” anE SlOkaM puTTinanATinuMDi — kavitvAniki, ChaMdassukugala ghanishThasaMbaMdhAnnigu~riMchi charchalu sAgu tUnE unnavi. kAni ChaMdassu rAmAyaNaMtOTE AraMbhaM kAlEdu. aMtakaMTe atipUrvamulaina vEdAlalO chAlA bhAgAlu ChaMdOmayaMgAnE unnavi. vEdamaMtrAlu paThiMchEMduku muMdugA, AmaMtrAniki kArakuDaina Rshini, adhipatiyaina dEvatanU, adi cheppabaDina ChaMdassunu muMdugA dhyAniMchi, A tarvAtanE maMtrAnni paThiMchaDaM paripATi. manaM telugulO InADu vADukonE sIsa,gItapadyAla lakshaNAlu vEdAlalO unnAyani 18va SatAbdiki cheMdina pottapu vEMkaTaramaNakavi tana lakshaNaSirOmaNilO sOpapattikaMgA nirUpiMchinADu.

telugulO Adikavi nannaya mahAbhArataM vrAsinanATinuMDI nETiva~raku saMpradAyakavulu ChaMdassulOnE kavitvAnni vrAstunnAru. viSvanAtha satyanArAyaNagAru “kavitvamunu ChaMdassulOnEvrAyavalenu” – ani cheppi konnAru. aitE InADu vachanakavitvaprAbalyaMvalla kavitvAniki ChaMdassutO pramEyaMlEdanE vAdana balavattaraMgA vinavastU unnadi. nETi vachanakavulaku gurusthAnaMlO nunna SrISrIgAru ChaMdassarpaparishvaMgavimuktamainadE navyakavitvamani mahA prasthAnaMlO vrAsikonnAru. idi InATi vachanakavulaku vEdavAkyaMlAga bhAsiMchaDaM sahajamE. AMglabhAshalO bayaludErina achChaMda, svachChaMdakavitOdyamaM telugukavitvAnipai chUpina prabhAvaMkUDa Ividhamaina dhOraNiki kAraNamani manaM gurtiMchavachchu. SrISrIgAru svayaMgA svinbarnukavichEta prabhAvituDainaTlu, vAri mahAprasthAnaMlOni konni khaMDikalu cheptu nnAyi.

IvyAsaMlO nEnu kavitvAniki ChaMdassu avasaramA, anavasaramA anE vAdAniki talapaDaDaMlEdu. ChaMdassulO vrAsina saMpradAyakavulanu bhUshiMchaDaM lEdu, vrAyani vachanakavulanu dUshiMchaDaM lEdu. kAni, saMskAravaMtuDaina kaviki kavitAvESaM kalginappuDu veluvaDE kavitvaMlO ChaMdassu svayaMbhuvugA – aMTE tanaMtaku tAnE – udbhavistuMdani nirUpiMcha dalachukonnAnu. aMduko~rakE I prastAvanaku “ChaMdOdharmamu” ani pErupeTTukonnAnu.

aitE, vachanakavitvaM vADavADalA vinavastunna IrOjullO ChaMdassunu gu~riMchina I vichAraM kEvalaM ChAMdasaM kAdA? ani koMdaraDugavachchu. vachanakavitvAnni vrAsinaMtamAtrAna ChaMdassunu gu~riMchi telisikonagUDadani, dAnni gu~riMchi vichAriMpagUDadani evvarU nishEdhiMpalEdu. paigA Irakamaina viSlEshaNa vachanakavulakugUDa hitaMgAnu, vAri krAphTunu niSitaMchEsEMdukugAnu tODpaDutuMdani nA viSvAsaM.

“saMgItamapi sAhityaM sarasvatyA@h stanadvayam|
EkamApAtamadharaM, anyadAlOchanAmRtam||”

ani unnadEkadA! saMgItamu, sAhityamu reMDU goppakaLalu. sAhityaM lEkuMDA saMgItaM vuMDavachchu – pASchAtya dESAlalO vaMdalAdi vAdyasaMgItakArulu chEri vAyiMchE siMphanIlu, AkASavANilO tarachugA vinipiMchE vAdyagOshThulu iTTivi. aTlE saMgItaM lEkuMDA sAhityaM vuMDavachchu. dIninE manaM vachanaM aMTAmu. AMdhraprabhApatrikalalOni kathAnikalalOnu, InADu kollalugA prachuritamautunna navalalalOnu uMDEdi vachanaM. oka aMdamaina ammAyi vuMdi. oka aMdamaina abbAyi unnADu. vAru vyastaMgA unnappaTikaMTE vAri prEmamayamaina sAhacharyaM ma~riMta paryAptaMgA vuMTuMdi. udyAnavanaMlO oka gunnamAmiDi unnadi. oka mAdhavIlata kUDa unnadi. kAni avi vE~ruvE~rugA uMDE dAnikaMTE mAdhavi mAmiDichuTTU allukoni niMDArinapUlatO navvatU vuMTE ma~riMta aMdaMgA vuMTuMdi. iTuvaMTidE saMgItasAhityAla kuMDE saMbaMdhaM. sAhityaM saMgItamayamaitE dAnini manaM pATa aMTAM. pATalO padAnikaMTE nAdAnikE adhika prAmukhyaM. nAdAnikaMTe padAniki prAmukhyamadhikamainappuDu manaM dAnni padyamaMTAM. padAni kIvidhaMgA nAdasaushTha vAnni chEkUrchEdE ChaMdassu.

ChaMdassanEdi bhAsha kevarO okaru peTTinaTuvaMTi alaMkAraMkAdu. adi ijAlaku, gijAlakU, vAgvivAdAlakU, arasa,virasavichakshaNalakU lObaDiMdi gAdu. adi bhAshalOgala padAla amarikalOMchi svayaMbhuvugA puTTukochchE nAda lakshaNaM. chakkani aMgAla poMdikanuMDi aMdamelAga svayaMbhuvugA bhAsiMchi sarvulanU AnaMdaparavaSulanu chEstuMdO chakkanipadAlapoMdikanuMDi ChaMdassu tanakutAnugA AvirbhaviMchi kavitvAniki nAdasaushThavaM chEkUrustuMdi. bhAvAvESaM kaliginappuDu kavitAtma ChaMdassulO aprayatnaMgA ghOshistuMdi. bAdhitamaina krauMchamithunAnni chUchinappuDu AvESa pUritamaina Adikavi kavitAtmaghOshayE anushTup ChaMdaMgA IvidhaMgAnE rUpoMdiMdani aMda~rU e~riginadE. dInini charvitacharvaNaM chEyaDaM anavasaraM.

I saMdarbhaMlO iTIvali nA anubhavAnni udAhariMpalEkuMDa uMDalEnu. amerikAvAsulaMda~rikI telusu. kenaDA #cold country# ani. #US# lO challagA unnapuDellA #Canadian Arctic Weather# nu vAru niMdistuMTAranikUDA nAku telusu. monnaTi mEnelalO vinnipeg^lO okarOju 22 DigrIlu, A ma~runADE reMDu DigrIluMDi, maMchukUDa kurisiMdi. I vishayAnnigu~riMchi mATlADutU nEnoka mitrunitO

#Yesterday it’s twentytwo,
Today it’s Two,

#ani annAnu. ataDu haThAttugA,
#It’s lousy that’s true.

#ani pUriMchADu. nAkE AScharyamaiMdi. kalipi chadivitE aMtyaprAsatO I mUDuvAkyAlU oka haikUlAga ayAchi taMgA tayArainAyi. idi goppa #Poetry# ani nEnu cheppaDaM lEdu. bhAvAvESaMvalla chEkUrina padAlakUrpuvalla nAdasaushThava meTlA ayAchitaMgA udbhaviMchiMdani cheppaDamE dIni lakshyaM. iMdulO ChaMdassu SithilarUpaMlOnainA ayAchitaMgA udbhaviMchiMdi.

ma~roka udAharaNaM tIsukoMdAM. ChaMdassarpaparishvaMgaMnuMDi kavitAkanyanu vimukti chEya baddhakaMkaNuDaina SrISrI gAru kavitvAnni gu~riMchi vrAsina I khaMDikanu gamaniMchaMDi:

“kada-lEdI, kada-liMchE-dI,
mA-rEdI,- mA-rpiMchE-dI,
pA-DEdI,- pA-DiMchE-dI,
penu-niddura- vada-liMchE-dI,
munu-muMduku- sA-giMchE-dI,
pari-pUrNapu- bratu-kichchE-dI,
kA-vAlOy- nava-kavanA-niki” (chaturasragati: 2+4+2+4+2)

tana kavitAkanya ChaMdassarpaparishvaMgaMnuMDi vimukturAlaiMdani ghOshiMchE I khaMDikanu chUDaMDi. muMdugA Ayana pAdAla vi~rupunu chUpi, A tarvAta aMdulO gala layanu spashTIkariMchEMdukugAnu, I pAdAlanu mAtrAbaddhaMgA saMdhiMchi chUputunnAnu.

“puMkhAnupuMkhaMgA
SmaSAnAlavaMTi nighaMTuvula dATi,
vyAkaraNAla saMkeLlu viDichi,
ChaMdassula sarpaparishvaMgaM vadali -
vaDigA, vaDivaDigA
veluvaDinai, parugiDinai, nAyeda naDugiDinai
A chelarEgina kalagApulagapu
vilayAvartapu
balavajhjharavat parivartanalO,
nE nEyE vIthulalO
chaMkramaNaM chESAnO,
nA sRshTiMchina gAnaMlO
prakshALita mAmaka pApaparaMpara
lAnaMdavaSaMvadahRdayuni jEstE –”

“puMkhA|nupuM|khaMgA|
SmaSA|nAla|vaMTi| nighaM|Tuvula| dATi|
vyAka|raNA|la saM|keLlu| vadali| (gaNAniki 3 mAtrala tryasragati)
ChaM|dassula| sarpapa|rishvaM|gaM| vadali -
vaDi|gA, vaDi|vaDigA| veluvaDi|nai|
paru|giDinai,| nAyeda| naDugiDi|nai|
A| chelarE|gina kala|gApula|gapu|
vila|yAva|rtapu bala|vajhjhara|vat
pari|vartana|lO, nE|nEyE|vIthula|lO
chaM|kramaNaM|chESA|nO, nA| sR|
shTiM|china gA|naMlO| prakshA|Lita|
mA|makapA|paparaM|para lA|naM
dava|SaMvada|hRdayuni| jEstE — (chaturasragati – 2+4+4+4++2)

pai gEyAlu salakshaNamaina mAtrAchChaMdassulO sAginavi. tryasragatilO naDichE 3 pAdAlu minahAyistE, migitA pAdAlannI chakkani chaturasragatilO naDustunnAyi. aMtEkAka modaTi khaMDikalO aMtyaprAsakUDa pATiMpabaDiMdi. aMTE I mahAkavi kavitAtmanu atanikE teliyakuMDA ChaMdassarpaM kATEsiMdanna mATa. pai SrISrIgAri gEyAnni, IkriMdi gEyaMtO pOlchichUDaMDi:

“charaNamulan
ganakasphuTanUpurajAlamu ghallanuchuM jela@Mgan,
garamula@M gaMkaNamul morayan,
naligau nasiyADa@M, guchAgramulan sarulu naTiMpa@M, gurul guniyan,
vilasanmaNikuMDalakAMtulu visphuritakapOlamulan berayan
vrajasuMdaru laMda ~ramaMdagatin…”

I gEya mevvaridA ani mIru vistupOtU uMDavachchu – I viDDUrAnninEnu tIrustAnu – idi pOtanamahAkavi SrImadbhAga vataMlOni daSamaskaMdhaMlO balarAmuni chUDavachchina gOpikala yavasthanu varNaMchE gEyaM – kAdu kAdu – kavirAjavirAjita manE padyaM. anni padyAlu vrAsinaTlu gaNabaddhaMgA dInini 4 pAdAlalO vrAstE, dIni svarUpa mIvidhaMgA uMTuMdi (nEnikkaDa iMdulO gala chaturmAmAtrAgaNabaddhamaina layanu UrdhvarEkhalatO vyastaMgA chUpeTTinAnu):

“charaNamu|laM gana|kasphuTa|nUpura|jAlamu| ghallanu|chuM jela|gan
garamula@M| gaMkaNa|mul mora|ya nnali|gau nasi|yADa gu|chAgramu|lan
sarulu na|TiMpa@M gu|rul guni|yan vila|sanmaNi|kuMDala|kAMtulu| vi
sphuritaka|pOlamu|lan bera|yan vraja|suMdaru|laMda ~ra|maMdaga|tin..”

ma~roka vachanakavi kALOjI nArAyaNarAvu vrAsina I khaMDikanu gamaniMchaMDi:

“venukaku chUstE bhUtaM
kanupiMchunu chUDaku aTu,
labhyaMkAni bhavishyaM
lakshistU rabhasapaDaku,
vartamAnaM vyarthaM chEyani
kartavyaM nIdani ma~ruvaku,
paSchAttaptulu pUrvataptulu
prastuta me~rugani vyaktulu vyarthulu.”

idi chakkani chaturasragatilO naDichE gEyaM. aMtEkAka niyataMgA yatiyO prAsayatiyO I khaMDikalO uMDaTaM viSEshaM. aMTE Ikavi kavitAvESAnni ma~riMtaghATugA ChaMda ssarpaM kATuvEsiMdannamATa!

pai udAharaNAlanu pErkonaDaMvalla nEnu cheppadalachiMdEmaMTE, ChaMdassanEdi kRtrimamaina AbharaNaMgAdu. saMskAravaMtuDaina kaviki kavitAvESaM kaliginappuDu doralE padabaMdhAlalO svAbhAvikaMgA samudbhavamayyE nAdaguNaM. nA vAdAniki lakshyamiMtamAtramE kAni, ChaMdassulO vrASArani Ivachanakavulanu vimarSiMchaDaM kAdu.

maulikamaina ChaMdOlakshaNAlanu ga~riMchi teliyanivA rarudugA uMTAru. ainA saMdarbhaparipushTikai maLlI vATini gurtuchEstAnu. telugulO ChaMdassulanu aksharaChaMdassulani, mAtrAChaMdassulani reMDurakAlugA vibhajiMpavachchu. utpala, chaMpaka, mattEbhAdivRttAlu aksharachChaMdassulakOvaku cheMdinavi. okaTinuMDi 26 gurvaksharAlanu kramaMgA vrAsi, vAnini prastAraM chEstE kOTlAdi aksharachChaMdOvRttAlu nishpannamautAyi. aitE okaTi gurtuMchukOvAli, iTlu kOTlAdi aksharagaNa vRttAlunnappaTikI mana telugulO dadApugA 50,60 vRttAlakaMTe ekkuva prachAraMlO lEvu. vInilOnU pAdAniki 20 aksharAluMDE utpala, mattEbhavRttAlakU, pAdAniki 21 aksharAluMDE chaMpakamAlakU, 19 aksharAluMDE SArdUlavRttAnikI unnaMta vyApakaM itaravRttAlaku lEdu. I aksharavRttAlakuMDE itaralakshaNAlu yatiprAsalu. yatiprAsala gu~riMchi chAlAmaMdiki sAmAnyaMgA telisEvuMTuMdi. ainA paripUrNatakai vAni lakshaNAlanu saMgrahaMgA cheptAnu. pAdAdyaksharamutO pAdamunaMdu nirNItasthAnamulO svaramaitri kaligina mitrAksharamunu vEyuTa yati vEyuTa anabaDunu. modaTi 9 ChaMdassulalOni pAdamulu chinnavigA nuMDuTachE vAniki yatiniyamamu lEdu. 10 aksharamulaku paibaDina pAdamulunna vRttamulakE yatiniyamamu. pAdamunaMdali reMDava aksharamunaku prAsAksharamani pEru. adE reMDava aksharamu anni pAdamulalO samamugA nuMDuTayE prAsalakshaNaM. udAharaNaMgA, ‘ha’ kAraM yatigA, ‘ra’kAraM prAsagA galigina SrImadbhAgavataMlOni pOtanamahAkavISvaruni I hRdyamaina padyAnni chUDaMDi:

“hAriki, naMdagOkulavihAriki@M, jakrasamIradaitya saM
hAriki, bhaktadu@hkhaparihAriki, gOpanitaMbinImanO
hAriki, dushTasaMpadapahAriki, ghOshakuTIpayOghRtA
hAriki, bAlakagrahamahAsuradurvanitAprahArikin.”

Adhuniku lanEkulu I yatiprAsaleMdukuMDAli? saMskRtaMlO prAsaniyamaM lEnElEdu. yatiyainA padavirAmamE kAni, tulyAksharaM vEyAlanE niyamaM lEdu. ma~ri telugulO I bAdhaleMduku? ani aDugavachchu. iMtakumuMdu manaM cheppu kunnAM – padasaMchayanaMvalla saMgItasaulabhyaM, SrutisubhagatvaM chEkUrchaDamE ChaMdassuyokka prayOjanamani. hiMdI lOnu, iMglIshulOnu aMtyaprAsalanu vADaTaM alavATu. udAharaNaM:

#The lovely Helen launched a mortal strife
When Paris the Prince plotted to gain a wife

#ikkaDa #strife# ku #wife# ku madhya aMtyaprAsa. dInnE iMglIshulO #Rhyme# aMTAru. aTlE #lovely, launch# lalOni lakArAlakU, #Paris, plotted# lalOni pakArAlakU yatimaitri uMdani cheppavachchu. I viSlEshaNaprakAraM mana telugulOni prAsanu Adi #Rhyme# gA gurtiMpavachchunu. aMTE iMglIshu,hiMdIkavulaku aMtya #Rhyme# ishTamaitE teluguvAriki Adi #Rhyme# ishTamaiMdannamATa. I vishayAnni spashTaMgA pai pOtanagAri padyaMlO gurtiMchavachchu. AMglabhAshAprabhAvaMvalla InATi vachana,gEyakavulu sAmAnyaMgA aMtya#Rhyme# nu pATiMchaDAniki ubalATapaDaTaM manaM gamaniMchavachchu. “kadalEdI, kadaliMchEdI” – anE SrISrIgAri gEyaMlO dInni spashTaMgA chUDavachchu. kAni kALOjI mAtraM pUrvakavulapaddhatilO padAdilO yatiyO , lEka prAsayO pATiMchi tana kavanAniki saMgItasaulabhyatanu chEkUrchinADu. iMtaku cheppadalachiMdE maMTE, gaNabaddhamai suspashTamaina layanugAni, lEdA AMtaraMgikalayanu gAni kalgina vRttAla SravaNasubhagatvAnni adhikaM chEyaDAnikE yatiprAsaniyamAlu teluguChaMdassulO chErchabaDDAyani.

SrISrIvaMTi Adhunikulu yatiprAsalu vyarthaprayAsa lanaDaM manaM vinE vunnAM. kAni ivi kavitAkalpanaku dOhadaM chEsE niyamAlani nEnu konnisArlu spashTamaina anubhUtini poMdAnu. udAharaNaku I padyaM chUDaMDi:

“vIrulu, svAmirakshaNapavitrakaLAniratAMkitAMgadhI
sArulu, sadvivEkapathachArulu, SAtravarAkshasATavI
chArulu, tyAgayOgaguNasArulu, nAMdhradharAsatISubhaM
kArulu, nAdu yOdhulani kshmApati yAtmanu nammiyuMDagan.”

idi nA “hanumappanAyakuDu” kAvyaMlOni padyaM. gadvAlaprabhuvaina sOmanAdri svalpabalaMtO karnUludurgaMlO turaka sEnala madhya chikkupaDi unna saMdarbhaMlO, A durgAniki velupala chikkukonna atani sainyaM yuddhaviramaNa chEsi tirigipOvA lani AlOchistunnapuDu hanumappa anE yOdhuDu vArini yuddhaMchEsi prabhuvunu rakshiMpuDani udbOdhiMchE ghaTTaMlOni dI padyaM. I padyaM reMDavapAdaMlO “sArulu” anE padaMlOni “sA”tOTi yati “chArulu” anu padaMlOni “chA”tO chelliMdi. dInni chelliMchaDAniki sadvivEkapathachArulu anE samAsaM paDiMdi. sainyaM prabhuvunu vadalipeTTi tirOgamiMpa yatniMchuchunna samayaMlO aTTi vichAraM sadvivEkapathaMlO chariMchE yOdhulaku tagadani – aTlA chEyaDaM avivEkamanI, vAriki sUTigA cheptuMdi I samAsaM. idi paDaDaMvalla I padyAniki eMtO arthapushTi kaligiMdi. nAku bAgA gurutu – sAtOTi yati chelliMchaDAnikE, okaTi reMDu nimushAlu AlOchiMchi nEnI samAvESAnni vEsinAnu. aMtEkAka vIrulu anE padaMtO padyaM modalu kAvaDaMvalla, dAnitO #Rhyme# chEsE padAlu prAsaniyamAnni pATiMchuTaku nAlgupAdAla modaTlO vEyuTayEkAka, I #Rhyming effect# nu adhikataraM chEyaDAniki 2,3 pAdAla madhyalO chArulu, sArulu anE padAlu paDDAyi. padyAniki prAsaniyamamE lEkuMTE padyarachanalO I adanapu aMdAnni kUrchE AlOchana nAku taTTakapOyEdEmO| ma~roka udAharaNa. koMtakAlaM kriMda prasannabhAratilO prachuritamaina “kannegulAbi” anE nA padyakhaMDikalO I padyA lunnAyi.

“nanu ganinaMta ne~r~ranayinaTTi madIyamanOharAMganA
hanuyugamuM garAbjamula naMTuchu naMTi, “chelI! vanaMbulaM
ganupaDa veMdu@MjUchinanu kannegulAbulu nEDu, aunulE!
kanupaDu neTlu nI mRdulagaMDamu laMdavi DAgiyuMDa@Mgan!”

aniyeDu nAdumATalaku naggalamai tagu siggupATuchE
kanakalatAMgi nemmogamu kaMde ma~riMtaga@M, brAksamutthapA
rvaNaSaSivOle, munnuganu pATalavarNavibhAsitaMbulai
chanina gulAbipUlipuDu chakkani raktima@M dAlche viMtagan.

kannegulAbipUvuvale kAyamunaMduna yauvanaMbu mE
lkonnapu Dunna vainamidi; kOnaku jA~reDu nE~ruvOle saM
skannamulayye nEMDlipuDu, kAni manaMbuna jA~rakuMDe@MbO
munnuga matpriyAmukhasamutthamulaina gulAbiyaMdamul! ”

I mUDava padyaMlOni reMDavapAdaM “lkonnapuDunna” ani prAraMbhamautuMdi. dIniki yati gUrchaDAniki “kOnaku jA~reDu nE~ruvOle saMskannamulayye nEMDlipuDu” – ani vrAsinAnu. nijaMgA I padyAnni AraMbhiMchinappuDu jAripOyE vayassunu, lEdA kAlAnni lOyalO jA~ripaDE naditO pOlchAlani nEnanukOlEdu. kAni “kO”tO yati chelliMchAlanE vij~natavalla chakkanaina I upamAnaM manassuku ayAchitaMgA taTTiMdi. vayassu jA~ripOvaDamaMTE kAlaM jA~ripOvaDamE, okasAri jA~ripOyina kAlAnni manaM venkanu trippalEmu. aTlAgE lOyalO adhOgatamaina nITini manaM tirigi paikekkiMcha lEmu. krotta nITini pOkuMDA aDDukaTTa kaTTagalamEmO kAni, pOyina nIru gataM gata@h. aMduko~rakE “gatajalasEtubaMdhana”manE nAnuDi prasiddhamaiMdi. I chakkanaina upamAna mikkaDa paDaDAniki yatinirbaMdhamE dOhadaM chEsiMdani nEnu vij~napti chEstunnAnu. aTlE reMDavapadyaMlO ‘kanakalatAMgi’ – anE sArthakasamAsaM, ‘pArvaNaSaSivOle’ – anE sArthakamaina suMdarOpamAnaM muMdugA nEnanukOnividhaMgA prAsanibaMdhanavalla svatassiddhaMgA sannaddhamainavani nA svIyAnubhavAnni vyaktIkaristunnAnu.

aitE paividhamaina ChaMdOniyamajanyamaina bhAvasphUrti ki anyamaina udAharaNA lunnAyA anE praSna udayiMpa vachchu. iTTi bhAvasphUrti spashTaMgA pratibiMbiMchE padyAla udAharaNAlu konniMTini nEnikkaDa chUputAnu.
ashTadiggajAlalO mETi diggajamaina rAmarAjabhUshaNuDu nA katyaMtaprItipAtruDu. ataDu vasucharitralO adhishThAna purAnni varNiMchE saMdarbhaMlO A nagaraMlOni pU@MdO@MTalanugu~riMchi I padyAnni vrAstADu:

“puripU@MdO@MTalatAvi minnalama vElpul mechchi tadbhUja bhA
svarasaMtAnamulan diviM benupa, nA saMtAnamul divya ni
rjhariNInirmalavAripUraparipOshaM baMdiyuM danmahA
tarulakshmIparipUrti@M gAna kesa@MgeM datkalpaSAkhiprathan.”

adhishThAnapuraMlOni udyAnavanAlalO uMDE pUla sugaMdhaM AkASaparyaMtaM vyApiMchiMdi. dAniki dEvatalu mechchukoni, aTTi sugaMdhamu dEvalOkaMlO lEdanukoni, A pUlamokkala saMtAnAlanu (pilakalanu) tIsikonipOyi dEvalOkaMlO nATukoni vATiki AkASagaMgAjalAlanu pA~riMchinA, avi adhishThAnapuraMlOni pUlamokkalaku sarigAnaMduna, A dEvalOkavRkshAlaku (tat) kalpavRkshAlani pEru vachchiMdani chamatkAraMgA rAmarAjabhUshaNuDu varNiMchADI padyaMlO. manaMdata~rikI telusu dEvalOkaMlO vuMDEvi kalpavRkshAlani. aitE kalpaSabdamu samAsaMlO uttarapadamainappuDu “aMtakaMTe koMchemu takkuvainadi – dAdApugA aTuvaMTidi” – anE arthaM vastuMdi. aMduchEta “tat-kalpaSAkhiprathan” – annapuDu bhUlOkavRkshAlakaMTe koMcheM takkuvavainaMduvalla A dEvatAvRkshAlaku kalpavRkshAlani pEruvachchiMdani iMdulO chamatkAraM. ‘paMchaitE dEvataravO mandAra@h pArijAtaka@h, santAna@h kalpavRkshaScha puMsi vA harichandanam’ – ani amaraMlO cheppinaTlu saMtAnamanEdi svarga lOkaMlO gala aidu dEvatAvRkshAlalO okadAniki pEru. adhishThAnanagaraMlOni cheTla saMtAnaM gAvaDaMvalla A dEvatAvRkshAniki santAnamanE pEru vachchiMdani iMdulO ma~roka chamatkAraM. I padyaMlOni bhAsha kAsta klishTaMgA uMDaDaMvalla nE nI vivaraNa ichchinAnu. ika prastutAMSAniki vattAM. I padyaMlO ‘ra’kAra prAsa uMdi. dAnini chelliMcha DAnikigAnu reMDavapAdaMlO bhA’svara’ – ani vEsinADu rAmarAjabhUshaNuDu. I SabdaM prAsaniyamaMvallanE ataniki sphuriMchi uMTuMdani nA viSvAsaM. I SabdaMvalla I padyAniki viSishTamaina arthasphUrti kaligiMdi. ‘bhAsvara’maMTE prakASiMchEdi ani arthaM. aMTE dEvatalu tIsikoni pOyi nATukonnavi nAsirakaM mokkalu kAdu- avi niganinagalADE sAravaMtamaina mokkalu – aTuvaMTi mElurakapu mokkalanu nATukoni divyagaMgAjalAlanu pA~riMchinA avi bhUlOkapu vRkshAla kaMTe tIsikaTTugAnE unnavani prAsa niyamaMvalla kavi vEsina ‘bhAsvara’SabdaMvalla viSEshArthaM I padyaMlO sphuristU unnadi.

prabaMdhakavulakaMTe pUrvuDaina nAchana sOmanAthuni uttaraharivaMSaM nAku priyamaina kAvyaM. aMdulO SrIkRshNuDu dvArakanu vIDi, badarIkEdAramulu, kailAsAlanu darSiMpa nEguchu tAnu lEnappuDu dvArakanu rakshiMchu bAdhyatanu sAtyakyA dulaku, yaduvRddhulaku appagistU yAdavavRddhuDaina uddhavunitO I vidhaMgA aMTADu:

“taMDrulu mIru, mIku nayatattvamu cheppeda manna mammu nE
maMDru janaMbu, lU~raDu bRhaspati mIyeDa, nEnu lEnichO
veMDrukayaMtamOsamunu vEchi duraMbuna ketti vachchu nA
pauMDruDu, vAnichEta manabaMdhulu chikkaka yuMDa@M gAvu@MDI!”

“mIru taMDrivaMTivAru mAku, mIku mEmu hitAhitAlu cheppaDaM tagadu, mI buddhikuSalata bRhaspatikigUDa U~raTa kaligistuMdi, kAni nEnu lEnappuDu veMDrukayaMta porapATu jariginanu pauMDrakavAsudEvuDu dvArakapai daMDetti vastADu, atanichEta manavAru chikkakuMDa mIru kApADavalenu” – ani SrIkRshNuDu vRddhuDaina uddhavuniki vinnaviMchukoMTADu. iMdulO yatiniyamaMvalla ‘U~raDu bRhaspati mIyeDa’ – anE viSishTArthabaMdhuramaina padabaMdhaM, prAsaniyamaMvalla ‘veMDrukayaMta mOsamunu’ – anE sArthakOpamAnaM ayAchitaMgA I padyaMlO sannaddhamainavani gurtiMchaDaM padyavidyA bhyAsaparulaku kashTaM gAdu.

AdhunikulalO iMdragaMTi hanumachChAstrigAraMTE nAkamitamaina gauravaM. vAri padyAlalO ennO apUrvamaina, viSishTamaina padabaMdhAlu manaku kanapaDutuMTAyi. vAri dakshArAmakRti oka suMdaraprauDhakhaMDakAvyaM. dakshArAma bhImESvaruni mahimalanu varNiMchE bhImakhaMDAnni SrInAthakavisArvabhaumuDu beMDapUDi annayamaMtriki aMkitamichchE sannivESaM I khaMDakAvyEtivRttaM. A saMdarbhaMlO annayamaMtri SrInAthuNNi sabhAmukhaMgA satkariMchi, AsthAnanartakI nATyakaLAvinyAsanIrAjanaMtO saMtushTuni gAvistADu. A saMdarbhaMlO hanumachChAstrigAru vrAsina padyamidi:

“tIyanichUpulan gaDusudE~rina nATyapurANi sOga kaM
dOyini velgu snEhamayadhOraNulaM barikiMchi, chekkiLul
mOya@Mga vennelal, madhuramUrti kavIMdru@MDu maMdahAsasu
SrIyutavaktru@MDai kanenu nRtyachaladbhuvanaikamOhinin.”

iMdulO ‘ya’ anEdi prAsAksharaM. I niyamAnni pATiMchEMdukugAnu hanumachChAstrigAru ‘chekkiLul mOya@Mga vennelal’ – ani atyaMtasuMdaramaina padabaMdhAnni vEsinAru. A nartakiyokka SRMgAramayamaina chUpulaku mugduDai maMdahAsaMchEsE kavisArvabhaumuni chekkiLlapai nUtna prakASaM vistariMchiMdi anE bhAvAnni ‘chekkiLul mOya@Mga vennelal’ ani cheppaDaM eMta suMdaraMgA uMdi? kavitvAniki iMtakaMTe paramAvadhi EmuMTuMdi? ma~ri I padabaMdhaM prAsa niyamaM vallanE kaviki ayAchitaMgA sphuriMchi uMTuMdanuTalO saMdEhamEmuMdi? I vidhaMgA prAchInArvAchInakavula kRtulalO anEkapadyAla nudAhariMpavachchu. machchuku konniMTini mAtraM nEnikkaDa chUpinAnu.

aitE pratipadyAnni iTlA layabaddhaMgA vrAyAlanE niyamaM lEdu. kavitvaM bhAvaprAdhAnyamaina daguTachE aMdulO layakaMTe bhAvaspashTIkaraNAnikE prAmukhyaM. kAni ChaMdassu venuka nuMDE layavinyAsAnni grahiMchina kavi, vADEpadabaMdhAlalOnu, padAla vi~rupulOnu eMtagAnO layavinyAsAnni pradarSiMpavachchu. aMduchEtaM I aMSAlanu dRshTilO nuMchukoni kavitvaM vrAyaDaMvalla mElE kAni kIDu chEkUradani nA abhiprAyaM. iMglIshulO “#Necessity is the mother of Invention”# anE sArthakamaina sAmeta vuMdi. I sAmetE yatiprAsala niyamAlanukOMDi, nirbaMdhAlanukOMDi – vIniki vartistuMdi. pariNatakauSalyaM gala vyakti kI nirbaMdhAlu saMkeLlugA gAka, pUladaMDalugA bhAsiMchi, atani kavitAkauSalyAnni inumaDiMpa jEstAyani nA abhiprAyaM. AraMbhaMlO UhiMpani pada baMdhAlaku, upamAnAdulakU, I nirbaMdhAlu udbhavakArakamu lautAyani nEnaMTAnu. ChaMdassuku tAnu lObaDaka, ChaMdassunu tAnu lOba~rachukonna kaviyokka kavitAkauSalyAnni niSitaMjEsE vI nibaMdhanalanI, vATini dUshiMchaDaM ‘ADarAka aMgaNaM vaMkara’ annaTuvaMTidaMTU manavi chEstU I vyAsAnni mugistAnu.

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  1. #prasAd abhiprAyaM:

    #November 1, 2006 12:52 pm

    #kRshNadESikAchAryulu gArU,
    mIlAMTi peddalaku cheppEMtavAnni kAdu. alAgE mIru cheppina vudAharaNalatO vibhEdiMchAlsina panI lEdu. chaMdObaddamaina padyAniki, laya baddamaina gEyAniki, bhAva baddamaina vachana kavitvAniki dEnikunna viluva dAnikuMdi. alAgE chaMdhassu annadi svayaMbhuvu annadAnitO mI vudAharaNalatO nEnEkibhavistAnu. oka maMchi layabaddamaina pATa viMTunnapuDu kAlu layabaddaMgA elA kadulutuMdO alAgE manasunu raMjiMpajEsina bhAvamu kavi nOTilO chaMdhObaddaMgA padyAnni palikistuMdani mI vyAsamaMtA chadivAka telusukunnAnu.
    ayitE chaMdhassu, yati prAsala niyamAlu kavitAkalpanaku dOhadaM chEsE niyamAlanaDaMtO vibhEdiMchAlsivastOMdi. mIrE annaTlu laya prAdhAnyaMgA vuMDAlaMTE chaMdassu avasaramE. ayitE bhAvamE pradhAnamaMTE chaMdassu kAka bAvAnni kaThinaMgA vyaktaparichE padAlanE ennukOvAli kadA! chaMdhassuku saripaDalEdanE kAraNaMchEta saraina bhAvAnni palikiMchE padAnni vadilivEyaDaM eMtavaraku sababu? mIrE cheppina chAlA vudAharaNallO yati niyamaM kOsaM okaTi reMDu niyamAlu AlOchiMchi A padabhaMdAlu chErchAmannAru kadA. nAkappuDu EmanipiMchiMdaMTE I yati niyamaM saMtRptiparachE padabhaMdaM doraggAnE mIlOni kavi mariMta maMchi padAnikai tana SOdhananu ApivESADEmonani! A niyamamE lEkuMTE iMkeMta bhAvapushTi kaligina padaM mIku dorikEdO! AvESaMgA ASuvugA padabhaMdAlu dorli #automatic#gA chaMdhObaddamaina pAdAlu janistE sarE kAnI yatO, prAsO kalisiMdanE sAkutO aMtakaMTe maMchivaina padAlanu vadilivEyaDaM samaMjasaM kAdEmo, layabaddamaina kavitvamE kAvAlanukuMTE tappa!
    –prasAd
    #http://blog.charasala.com

  2. Raja Shankar Kasinadhuni # abhiprAyaM:

    #November 2, 2006 3:35 pm

    #kRshNadESikAchAryulagAri vyAsaM chAlA bAguMdi. maMchi padyaM chadivinappuDu, yati prAsala niyamAlani pATistU kUDA I kavi eMta chakkani padyaM vrAyagaligADani anukunEvADini. ayitE, yati prAsalu padadAridryaMtO bAdhapaDE kavulaku saMkeLLaitE, satkavulaku tama bhAvAnni mariMta bAgA vyaktaM chEyaDAniki dOhadaM chEsE sAdhanAlanE AlOchana I vyAsaM chadivEdAkA kalagalEdu. iMta chakkani vyAsaM vrAsina rachayatakU, prachuriMchina ImATa saMpAdakulakU dhanyavAdAlu.

    kASInAthuni rAjASaMkar

  3. #baabjeelu # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 8, 2008 8:23 am

    #ayyA,
    mIru vrAsina vyAsaM chAlA chakkagA vuMdi.
    “prasAdu” gAru vrAsina abhiprAyaM sarainadi. dAniki mIru pratispaMdiMchakapOvaDaM bAdhAkaramayina vishayaM.
    “rAjASaMkar ” gAru vrAsina “padadAridryaM tO bAdhapaDE” kavula vishayaM anyAyaM.
    kavitvaM kOsaM ChaMdassA, ChaMdassu kOsaM kavitvamA? kavitvaM kOsaM ChaMdassu vadulukODaM tappA? ChaMdassu kOsaM kavitvAnni bali chEyaDaM oppA?

    kaviki ChaMdassutO pATU, saMskrutaM, karATE, bharatanATyaM, vurdU, iTAliyan, gOMgUra pachchaDi chEyaDaM, vUDipOyina guMDIlu kuTTaDaM, pustakAlaki aTTalEyaDaM, pillalaki annAlu peTTaDaM, chitralEkhanaM, mEjik chEyaDaM, pillimoggalEyaDaM vagairAlalO advitIya pratibha vuMTE, A kavigAri kavitvAniki mIlATi paMDitulU, “prasAdu” gArilATivALLu, mA bOMTlu maimarachipOtaM.

    mIvaMTivAru SrISrI kavitvAnni parAmarSiMchi, SrISrI kUDA chaMdassanE pAmukATuki gurayyADani rAyaDaM bhAvyamA? madhyalO kALOjI gAri “goDava”, “jayaprabha” gAru kUDA “gati” tappalEdani telisi “hammayya” anukunnanu.

    SrISrI ChaMdassu chaduvukuni vachchinavADEkadaMDI? aMdukE tolirOjullO rAsina kavitvaM vutpalamAla, chaMpakamAla vagairAlalO vuMDakapOyinA “gati”lO vuMTuMdi. SrISrI kUDA “gati” tappalEdani “prUv” chEsestE ChaMdassu goppadayipOtuMdA?

    mArutunna kAlaMtO pATU mArina kavulaMdarU ivAlTikI batikEvunnAru.
    nannaya telugulO kavitvaM modaleTTina rOjullO ennitiTlu tini vuMTADaMDI, saMskruta paMDitula valla. alAgE mAmulu prajalu mATlADE bhAshalO kavitvaM rAyaDaM modaleTTina kavulu, nannaya “padhdhatilO” vrAsina kavula tiTlu tinEvuMTAru.
    aMteMduku, yaMDamUri vIrEMdranAth modaTlo tiTlutini, taravAta, taravAti taraM vALLani “sAhityAnni bhrashTu paTTiMchestunnAru” ani anaDaM kAla mahima kadU? viMta kadU?
    pAnugaMTi vAru vrAsina “kAla svarUpuDu” chadivitE, nannayani tiTTina vALLU, taravAti vALLani tiTTina vALLU, vIrEMdranAthU aMdarU “sarvEjanA sukhinO bhavaMtu” anukunuMDE vAru. (“sarvEjanA” aMTE “sarvE” DipArTmeMTE kAdu “revinyU” vAru kUDA ani manavi.)
    “dhAraNa” guriMchI, kaMThatA paTTavalasina avasaraM lEkapOvaDaM guriMchI ikkaDa vrAyaDaM mI lATivALLa vijnatani anumAniMchaDavE. aMta sattuva nA daggara lEdu.

  4. #rajasankar kasinadhuni # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 20, 2008 6:28 am

    #kavitvaM kOsaM ChaMdassA, ChaMdassu kOsaM kavitvamA? kavitvaM kOsaM ChaMdassu vadulukODaM tappA? ChaMdassu kOsaM kavitvAnni bali chEyaDaM oppA?

    ChaMdassuvalana kavitvAniki origEdEmiTi?

    I praSnalaki samAdhAnAlu AMglakavi #P.B. Shelley# rAsina “#To a Sky Lark”


    Thou art unseen, but yet I hear thy shrill delight

    Like a high-born maiden
    In a palace tower,
    Soothing her love-laden
    Soul in secret hour
    With music sweet as love, which overflows her bower…

    #lOni bhAvAnni rAyaprOlu subbArAvugAru tana chaMpakamAla padyAlalO eMta madhuraMgA poMduparichArO AlOchiMchi chUstE dorakavachchu:
    “pramada rasOdayAlasa taraMgamulan daviliMchi, pArava
    Syamuna nuyAlalUpedavayAre! charAchara chEtana prapaM
    chamu bahiraMtara bhramaNa sAdhvasamEdi praSAMtamayye, nE
    tramulaku gAnarAvu, madhuraMbuga pADedaveMdo kOyilA!

    dhavaLa chiratna ratnarachitaMbagu saudhamunagramaMdu pU
    navakapu sejjapai valapunan tana kinnera mELaviMchi mO
    havaSamugA prapaMchamunu nAkulapeTTu noyArivOle, nI
    bhuvanamunella rAgamaya bhOgamulan daniyiMto kOyilA!”

    nEnu nammina satyaM: nijamaina kavitvaM cheppagaligana vArikevarikI ChaMdassu ATaMkaM kAdu. bhAsha mIda paTTulEka, vachanakavitA prakriyani aDDaMpeTTukuni edO giliki pArEsi ChaMdOdharmAnni vadilipeTTinaMduvalle iMta goppa kavitvaM vrAyagaligAmani jabbalu charuchukunE (ku)kavulu, vAri bhajaMtrIlu vistRtapaThanaM alavATu chEsukuMTE paina machchuku cheppina udAharaNalulATivi kOkollalu kanapaDatAyi telugu sAhityaMlO.

    Adhunika telugukavitvAniki AdyuDugA gurtiMpu poMdina rAyaprOluvAru adbhutamaina kavitvAnni alavOkagA chilikiMchagala goppa kavi. yatiprAsalu padyAniki atikiMchinaTTu uMDakUDadanEvArilO Ayana okaru ani AchArya boDDupalli purushOttaMgAru nAtO eppuDU anEvAru. kavitvabhAsha guriMchi alAMTi mahanIyuDu rAyaprOluvAri mATallOnE:

    dhEnuvulu tinu bahuvidha tRNachayammu
    trAvu nAnAnadIkUpa jIvanamunu
    kalisi pariNamiMpave pAlugA dharitri
    SabdamELana taMtranaijammu nidiye

    rAyaprOlugAri kavitvAniki nannu parichayaM chEsini pUjyulu AchArya bhoDDupalli purushOttaMgAriki nEnu eMtO RNapaDi unnAnu.

    rAjASaMkar kASInAthuni

  5. #satya rama prasad kalluri # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 20, 2008 7:27 am

    #annaTlu SrISrI ‘ siprAli ‘ EmiTaMDI? ‘sirisirimuvva, prAsakrIDa, limarikkula samAhAramE kadA! vITilO ChaMdassu lEnivEvi?

    telugu sAmetallO sAdhAraNaMgA yatO, prAsO lEkuMDA uMDi uMTE vATilO sagAniki sagaM kAlagarbhaMlO kalisipOyi uMDEvi kAvA?

    bhAvaM puNyAMgana ayitE dAniki sOkunu (bAhyamE kAnakkaralEdu) ChaMdassu anukOvachchunu ani nEnanukoMTunnAnu. (dIninE evarO oka pUrvikuDu puNyAMganaku paNyAMganakuvale aMdAnni kUrchEdi ChaMdassu annADu.) ‘yatiprAsalu visarjiMpabaDinavi’ ani bOraviruchukOvaTaM sulabhamEgAni, laya kUDA lEni kavitalu kAlapurushuDi kaTTeduTa nilavaTaM kashTamE.

    eTochchI ChaMdassukOsaM kavitvaM anaTaMkUDA telivitakkuvE.

    AMdhrapatrikalO okappuDu prAsa eMta sAMkrAmikamO (#contagious)# cheppaTAniki oka udAharaNanu ichchAru. evarO oka siMgugAru krottagA telugutO kustIpaDutU ‘anumAnAnikainA AskAraMlEkuMDA tiraskariMchi paMpAru’ aMTE kOpaMtO vALLa bAsu ‘misTar siMg ! raimiMg kOsaM mIniMg pADuchEyaddani mIkennisArlu vArniMg ivvAli?’ annADaTa. mari dInini kavitvaM ani evarU anaru kadA!

    chEtanaina vaiNikuDi chEtilO elAgaitE svarAlu vATaMtaTa avE sariggA vastAyO, alAgE kavitvaMcheppEvADi mukhata@h rAvalasina laya, saMdarbhOchitaChaMdassu vagairA avE vachchipaDatAyi. vetukkuMTE vachchEvikAvu avi.

    gaNitaMprakAraM kavitvaMlO bhAvaM, ChaMdassu parasparapUrakAlu (#complementary)# anukOvaTaM sababEmOnanipistOMdi nAkaitE.

    Edi EmainA AlOchiMpajEsina, maMchi vyAsAnni aMdiMchina dESikAchAryulavArini abhinaMdistunnAnu.

    kallUri satyarAma prasAd
    #kalluriprasad@hotmail.com

  6. baabjeelu # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 20, 2008 9:27 am

    #pAvalA paTkA, pAtikarUpAyila jaTkA.
    paTkA ChaMdassu, saMdhulU, samAsAlU vagairAlu.
    jaTkA kavitvaM.
    mari gurraM?
    asalayina dAninelA voggestAvaMDI.
    “kavitA vastuvu”.

    padya kavitvavayinA, polai polai / millu khaddaru kavitva vayinA “ityAni padya/kavita lakshaNAni” (paiTalu/chunnIlu tagaleTTaMDi anE kavitvavayinA)

  7. #rajasankar kasinadhuni # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 20, 2008 10:22 am

    #kukkapilla, aggipeTTi, sabbu biLLa, gurraM, gADida kAvEvI kavitakanarhaM. eTochchI rAsEvALLakunna arhata tOnE pEchI.

    rAjASaMkar kASInAthuni

  8. pAmarti satyanArAyaNa abhiprAyaM:

    #August 20, 2008 1:08 pm

    #padyavastuvunu nEnu.
    nEnokappuDu kaLLeMlEni gu~r~raM
    svEchChAprANI, svairavihArI, paMchakaLyANi
    nA chUpE nA paridhi, nA dArE nA vIdhi

    tinnadE bhOjanaM,
    vinnadE saMgItaM,
    chUsiMdE iMdrajAlaM,
    chEsiMdE chamatkAraM.

    nAku gataMlO kaLLeM toDigAru
    Dekkalaki lADAlu koTTAru
    kaLLaki gaMtalu kaTTAru
    mUtikEmO chikkaM vEsAru

    vIpuki jInu tagiliMchAru
    meDaki gaMTalu kaTTAru
    tama pichchana gamyAlu vivariMchAru!
    nA bAdhyatalanu ghOshiMchAru!

    rautuleMdarO vIpekkAru
    karmakoddI barughOlu mOyiMchAru
    lEkapOtE baLLu lAgiMchAru
    urukulu parugulu vEyiMchAru
    kAdaMTE koraDA jhuLipiMchAru

    appuDA gaMtalE nA jIvitaM
    nA baruvulE nATi manugaDa
    nA jInE appaTi nA svargaM
    jhATI debbE nA narakaM
    rautE nA bhagavaMtuDu

    chikkaMpOtE bhOjanaM;
    pani chikkitE upavAsaM
    gaMtalupOtE vIkshaNaM;
    viSrAMtikE appuDu kATakaM
    nuMchuMTE oka SOsha,

    paDukuMTEnoka maikaM
    alA A sAhitya sAgarAnni
    laMghiMchaDamasAdhyaM!
    aMdukEnOy! maLLI ippuDu
    mUrkhatvAnni maTTubeTTi

    marOsAri padya vastuvu
    kaLLeM lEni gu~r~raM!
    svEchChAprANI,
    svairavihArI,
    paMchakaLyANi.

    ayyA bAbjIlu gAru

    mIru pratibhAvaMtulanI, paMDitulanI, viTulanI #[:-) as in English wit;# yiTuvaMTi tarjumAlatO vachchina goDavE idi. vedhavadi manaM cheppochchEdokaTi, itarulaki arthamayyEdi yiMkOTInu. pOnI viTTulaMdAmA aMTE adi yiMkA ghOraM kadaMDI! mottAniki nEnu cheppochchEdi mIku arthamayyiMdi kadA, adE chAlu#]# aMdarU oppukunnAru kadA! mari gajEMdruDi mora AlakiMchani vishNu mUrtilA ennALLu vuMTAru cheppaMDi?

    namaskAramulatO

    pAmarti satyanArAyaNa vrAlu

  9. #baabjeelu # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 20, 2008 9:06 pm

    #rAsI vALLa “arhata” tO pEchI?
    rAsI vALLU “rAsinadAni” tO pEchI?
    “arhata” lEnnivALLu maMchi kavitvaM rAstE pEchI?
    “arhata” vunna vALLu elA gilikinA “pEchI”?

    chAlA pedda pEchI.

  10. #Sai Brahmanandam Gorti # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 21, 2008 9:52 am

    #bAbjIlu gAru,
    mIrochchAka ImATa ki hiTlU, rAsE vALLaki tiTlU perigAyi : )-
    mIku “arhata” tO pEchI – nAku “praSna” latO pEchI!

    praSniMchE vALLa “arhata” tO pEchI?
    praSniMchE vALLa “praSnala” tO pEchI?
    “arhata” lEnnivALLu maMchi praSna vEstE pEchI?
    “arhata” vunna vALLu elA praSniMchinA “pEchI”?
    asalu E “praSnA” lEkapOtE pEchI!

    chAlA pedda pEchI.
    I “pEchI” yE aMtu chikkani praSna!

    saradAki rAsAnu – dayachEsi bANAsaMchAlu bayaTaki tIyakaMDi. dIpAvaLi daggarlO lEdu :)

  11. #baabjeelu # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 21, 2008 10:24 am

    #sAyigArU,

    rAsEvALLaki arhata akkarlEdu.

    eMdukaMTE vALLu rAsina dAni “arhata” mIda adi batikitE batukutuMdi, lEkapOtElEdu. rAsinavALLu “malabAru pOlIsu gEMgIlneTTi, rAsiMdi bAgOlEdani rAsina vALLaMdarnI sitakkoMTIchisinA” dAni arhata mAradu.

    rAchakoMDa viSvanAtha SAstri gAru “rattAlu rAMbAbu” navala vishayaMlO cheppiMdi, rAsE vALLaMdarU AchariMchadaggadi.

    “katha rAsEka, dAnni mariMka viDichi peTTaka, dAni mAnAnna dAnni batakanivvaka (lEdA chAvanivvaka) A rAsinavADu, dAnni sAkutU, saMrakshiMchukuMTU, samarthiMchukuMTU, nettini peTTukoni tiragaDaM nAku ishTaM lEdu.

    nijAniki daggaragA vuMTE katha konnALLu uMDavachchu. sattuvuMTE uMTuMdi, lEkapOtE pOtuMdi.

    “rattAlu rAMbAbu” navala guriMchi EmainA teliyAlaMTE, adi navala vallE teliyAli kAni nA valla kAdu.”

    aMduchEta, rAsina prakriyaki arhata uMDAli, chadivE vALLaMdarichEtA “sebAs” anipiMchukunE arhata. chadivE vAriki arhata kAvAli. arthaM chEsukunE arhata. “sebAs” anagaligE arhata. rAsE vALLaki E arhatA akkarlEdu. rAyagaligE arhata tappa.

  12. pAmarti satyanArAyaNa abhiprAyaM:

    #August 21, 2008 11:17 am

    #paikiMkOsAri veLLi abhiprAyAlanniMTinI maLLI chadivAnu. ekkaDO kukavulanna mATa kanapaDiMdi. aMTE EmiTabbA ani AlOchiMchAnu.

    sukavulu sukkalu (#stars)# kadA. prAsa kalavAlaMTE kukavulu kukkalavaka tappadu.

    nAkoddu bAbOy A Sunaka saMbaraM.

    kAbaTTi takshaNa kartavyaMgA

    uttishThaMtu bhUtapiSAchA@h EtE bhUmi bhArakA@h
    EtEshAmavirOdhEna padya karma samArabhE

    ChaMdAmAvAhayAmi, prAsAmAvAhayAmi, yatImAvAhayAmi
    yamAtArAjabhAnasalagamAvAhayAmi, chaMdrAmAvAhayAmi, sUryAmAvAhayAmi, iMdrAmAvAhayAmi, nAnAvidhAni divyAni gaNAnAmAvAhayAmi.

    namO nama@h

    pAmarti kAlabhairava (soMta pEru cheppukuMTE vunna vUru achchirAdu annAru peddalu!)

    tAjA balapaM: gorti vAri hiTsU, tiTsU prAsa brahmAMDaMgA vuMdi.

    tAjA tAjA balapaM: dIpAvaLi mATa dEvuDerugu. vinAyaka chaviti maMtrAllO kUDA gaNAlE vinabaDutunnAyi nAku. namma SakyaM kAka pOtE mIrE cheppaMDi. gaNAnAMtvA gaNapati …

    #All this is for fun. I love both metrical and non metrical poetry as long as it is good. :)

  13. Sai Brahmanandam Gorti # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 21, 2008 11:38 am

    #bAbjIlu gArU,

    mOhana rAvu gArannaTlu “mIrochchAka I mATa klik chEyani rOju” lEdu. vachchI rAgAnE mI kAmeMTla kOsaM chUstAnu. avi chadavaDaM ippuDOka vyasanaM lA tayArayyiMdi. nAkU “rAvi SAstri” rachanalaMTE chAlA ishTaM. Ayana “vEtana Sarma” ani, 1970 llO anukuMTA, O katha rAsAru. adi ippaTikI vartistuMdi. idE kathanAdhAraMgA nEnu “chinuku” anE nATakaM rAsAnu, O nATakAla pOTIki. adi viSAkha paTnaMlO pradarSiMchAru. 1984 lO jagadAMba seMTarlO rAviSAstri gArni kalisAnu. dAdApu pAtikELLa taruvAta kUDA “aksharaM pollupOkuMDA” nAkiMkA gurtunnAyi Ayana mATalu. Ayana rAtalatO nimirina telugu katha ajAramaraM.
    mIrannaTlu “sattu” vuMTE kAlaM mOstuMdi. lEkapOtE adi rachayata bhujAla mIda bratukutuMdi.
    mI vAkyAlu pAta j~nApakAlani tavvutunnAyi.

  14. viplav abhiprAyaM:

    #August 22, 2008 10:31 am

    #bAbjIlu gArU,

    “rAsEvALLaki arhata akkarlEdu.” anEdi aMta DephiniTiv gA cheppaTaM kashTamEmO?

    rAsiMdi goppadayitE dAnikadE nilabaDutuMdi, annadi bAgAnE uMdi.

    kAnI,

    pillalakoraku ‘nIti pustakAlu’ rAyaTAniki #child molestors# paniki rAru, rAsina vishayaM eMta goppadayinA sarE. rAsE vALLaku #credibility# uMDAli kAbaTTE evarrAsAru annadi mukhyaM.

    ika “kreDibiliTI” annadi oka jAruDubaMDE kadA aMTE, adi kUDA nijamE. rAsina vishayAnikunna tIvratanu baTTi rAsina vArini praSniMchaTaM jarugutuMdi, kAdaMTArA?

    ninnImadhyE I kAmeMTlu chadavaTaM modalu peTTAnu. mIrrAsE bhAshaku maMchi spaMdana uMTuMdi annadi vErE evarU cheppAlsina panilEdu.
    evarainA “rAsE telugu” ku oka sTAMDarD uMDAli ani aMTE mIrEmaMTAru, ImATa yUnikOD alavATainAka? mI abhiprAyaM mI bhAshalO cheppaMDi.

    viplav

  15. #Ravikiran Timmireddy # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 25, 2008 6:34 am

    #“idigO, batukaMTE idI batuku, ilA batakaDavE batuku.” phalAni vidhaMgA bratakaTavE goppa, phalAni dArlO prayANiMchaDavE voppu, batukki phalAni nirvachanavE karakTu. oka anaMtavaina anubhavAniki diSa nirdESaM chEsE prayatnaM. ellalu lEnaTuvaMTi oka adbhutAniki chaTrAlu bigiMchE prayatnaM. niyamitavaina saMghaMlO, parimitavaina avakASAlunna saMghaMlO (batukavasarAlu tIrchukODAniki) I rakavaina diSanirdESaM sahajavE. kAnI koMdaruMTAru vALLani niyamAltOnU, avakASAltOnU ApaDaM sAdyaMkAdu. akASAnnI, gAlini, anaMtAnni niMpukuni puTTina vALLu, Anni chaTrAlani pagala kODtAru, anni niyamAlni chiMdaravaMdara chEstAru. vALLaki bratukoka svapnaM, vALLu bratukuni, bratakaDAnni vEruvErugA chUDaru, vALLu kavitani, vachana kavitani viDadIsi chUDaru. nA drushTilO bratukuni anubhaviMchi palavariMchaDavE kavitvaM. A palavariMtaki voka niyamAvaLi akkaralEdu, oka repharensu akkaralEdu. dAnikO praNAlika, pAThya graMdhaM akkaralEdu, dAnikO sarTiphikET akkaralEdu. A anubhUti, A palavariMta eduTi manasuni tAkagaligitE chAlu (tAkakapOyinA paravAlEdu). adi E rUpaMlO vuMdi, E bhAshalO vuMdi, evari batukunu tanalO poduvukunochchiMdi anEvi avasaravani nEnanukOnu. ChaMdOdharmAlu, vyAkaraNa sUtrAlu vuMTE vuMDanivvaMDi, kAnI avi lEkapOvaDaM balahInata kAdu. bhAvaprasaraNa jarigiMdA lEdA anEdE kAvAligAnI, gaDichipOyina dinAllO, naDichipOyina kavula repharensulu avasaraM vuMdani nEnanukOnu.

    nAmini, rAvI SAstri rachanallO nAkA batuku palavariMtE kanapaDutuMdi, nAku kavitvavE kanapaDutuMdi. adi vachanavA aMTE vachanavE kAnI adi nissaMDEhaMgA kavitvavE. mana anubhavAnni vyakthaM chEyaDAniki rOjuvArI padAlu saripOkapOvaDavEviTO nAku telIdu. akkaDA, ikkaDA gataMlOnU, graMdhAllOnU vetakanakkaralEdu. ImATalO prachuritavaina kavitallO (kavitalannI nachchAlani kAdu), nAkekkaDA padadAridryaM kanapaDalEdu. mAmUlu manushula, mAmUlu bratukula, mAmUlu mATallO vyaktIkariMchalEni jIvitAnubhavaM vokaTuMdA?

  16. #baabjeelu # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 25, 2008 7:16 am

    #viplav gArU,
    “rAsE telugu” guriMchi: idi “amrutaM”, “krushNuDu” ani nEnu rAsina vATiguriMchi anukuMTAnu. vuppala lakshmaNarAvugAri prabhAvaM. I mATa saMpAdaka vargaM vArE hechchariMchEru. mA guruvugAru kUDA “spelliMg” diddiMchEru.amRtaM ani rAyaDaM kashTavani nEnanukOvaTaMlEdu. nijAniki aMta paTTiMpU lEdu. migilina kavula/rachayata(tru)la, vyAsuLLa tallidaMDrulu I mATa saMpAdakavargAnni kalisi ilATi “spelliMgulu” rAsE vALLa abhiprAyAlu mI patrikalO vEstE kudaradu, kAdU kUDadaMTE mApillala “TIsI” lichchEyaMDi ani bediriMchEranukOMDi, appuDu nEnu mAripOvachchu lEdA I mATa lO nEnu abhiprAyAlu rAyakapOvochchu.
    iha “kreDibiliTI” guriMchi: “eTochchI rAsE vALLa arhata tOnE pEchI” ani rAjA SaMkar gArannadI, dAni guriMchi migilinavALLaMdarU rAsiMdi, rAsE vALLa rAyagaligE sattuva guriMchi. ChaMdassu guriMchI, lakshaNa graMdhAlu chadavaDaM guriMchI, nannayAdi kavula kAvyAlani aupOsana paTTaDaM guriMchI vagairAla guriMchi. idaMtA “guMchI” daggarO, “boMkuladibba” daggarO, “aikOnEru gaTTu” mIdO (peddAMjanEyasvAmi guDi daggara) sAyiMtraM kalusukuni kaburlADukunE vALLa vyavahAraM. migatA paristitulannI mArakuMDA vuMTE appuDu kaviki kAvalsina “arhata” la guriMchi.

    mIru cheppina jAruDubaMDa saMgati: jIvitaMlO migilina vyavahArAllO kavi elAvuMDAlannadi. chAlA kashTaM. jIvitaM “Dainamik” vyavahAraM kadA? aMdulOnU “phOrt Daimanshan” ni paTTukuni appuDu “trIDaimanshan” lO kavigAri saMgati tElchaDaM “kamnisTulu” kUDA cheyyalErEmO? eMdukaMTE “phOrt Daimanshan” ni paTTukuni ApagalagaDaM kudaradu. aMdukE, telisina vAru kAbaTTi “jAruDu baMDa” ani chakkagA cheppEru. (“kamnisTulu” aMTE migilina aMdarikannA telivayina vALLani chinnapaTniMchI “brain vAsh” avaDaMvalla vADEnu.)
    mIru rAsina “ChailD mOlesTars” chinna pillala kathalu rAyaDAniki panikirAru aMTE vALLu peddavALLakOsaM kathalu rAstE parvAlEdA?

  17. #mOhana # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 25, 2008 12:41 pm

    #nannaya kAlamulO R-kArAnni ri-kAramugA palikEvAru.
    aMdukE A kAlapu SAsanAlalO kUDa RNamu anR dAniki
    badulu riNamu ani vADAru. kAni tikkana kAlAnikE R-kArAnni
    ru-kAramugA palakaDAniki AraMbhiMchAru. tikkanagAru konni
    chOTulalO R-kArAniki ru-kArAniki yati kUDa chelliMchAru.
    sAmAnyamugA ChaMdassulO idi nishiddamu. R-kArAniki
    ri-kArAniki, i, I, e, E, hi, hI, he, hE, yi, yI, ye,
    yE, R-kAramu unna anni hallulaku yati chellutuMdi.
    kAbaTTi amrutamu ani palikETappuDu, vyAvahArika bhAshalO
    amRtamunaku badulu alA rAyaDamulO tappu lEdani
    nA bhAvana. grAMthikamugA mAtramu adi sari kAdu, aMtE.
    teluguvAru mAtramE kAdu, kannaDa, marAThI, oriyA bhAshalalO
    R-kArAnni ru-kAramugA palukutAru. migilina uttara
    bhAshalalO ri-kAramugA palukutAru.
    vidhEyuDu – mOhana

  18. je.yu.bi.vi. prasAd abhiprAyaM:

    #August 26, 2008 7:25 am

    #viplav gAru, “pillalakoraku ‘nIti pustakAlu’ rAyaTAniki #child molestors# paniki rAru, rAsina vishayaM eMta goppadayinA sarE. rAsE vALLaku #credibility# uMDAli kAbaTTE evarrAsAru annadi mukhyaM” ani rAsinadAnni, bAbjIlu gAru mahA yAMtrikaMgA arthaM chEsukuni, badulugA Ayana, “mIru rAsina “ChailD mOlesTars” chinna pillala kathalu rAyaDAniki panikirAru aMTE vALLu peddavALLakOsaM kathalu rAstE parvAlEdA?” ani aDigAru. adA dAnarthaM?

    viplav gAru rAsina mATala venakanunna arthAnni sarigA grahiMchAli. nItivaMtamaina pravartana lEni manushulu guriviMda giMjallAgA, naMganAchullAgA itarulaki nItulu chEppE arhata kaligi vuMDaru ani arthaM. yAMtrikaMgA arthaM chEsukuni, chailD mOlesTarsU, peddALLU, gaTrA ani rAstE, EmannA arthaM vuMTuMdA?

    viplav gAru rAsiMdi chAlA karekTu. “deyyAlu maMtrAlu valliMchakUDadu” ani aMTAru chUSArA, alAganna mATa. nIti lEni vAru nIti guriMchi itarulaki cheptE, “nuvvu chEsEdEviTI, cheppochchAvu goppagA itarulaki” ani A itarulu niladIstAru. vALLu dulupuku pOtAranukOMDI, adi vErE saMgati.

    ayitE prastuta samAjAnni pariSIliMchaMDi. deyyAla kadhalU, thrillar navallU rAsi, pApular rachayitagA pEru saMpAdiMchukuni, kAlEjI ADapillanu vaSaparuchukuni, A pilla Atmahatyaku kAraNamaina goppa rachayita I rOjukI goppagAnE chalAmaNI avutunnADu. viplavAla guriMchi goppagA rAsi, iddaru bhAryalanu peTTukuni, bayaTa strIlatO saMbaMdhAlu peTTukuMTU, “enni sigareTlu kAlchinA chAr mInAr kAlchina tRpti vuMDadu. eMta maMdi ADavALLatO tiriginA, nA reMDO bhAryatO gaDipinaTTu vuMDadu” ani Atma kadhalO rAsukuni, A bayaTi ADavALLanu snEhitulatO paMchukuMTU, vichchalaviDigA tirugubOtutanAnni pradarSiMchina vAru mahA kavulugA chalAmaNI avutU, patitala guriMchI, bhrashTala guriMchI goppa kavitvAlu rASAru. iddaru bhAryala bhujAla mIdA chEtulu vEsi, patrikallO phoTOlu vEyiMchukunE viplava kavulunnAru. ilA eMta maMdi guriMchO cheppukOvachchu. prajalu vILLa sAhityaM chadavaDaM mAnESArA? A madhya ADapillalni iMDiyA niMchi tIsukuvachchi, amerikAlO vyabhichAraMlOki diMchina bijines mEn kEsu guriMchi vinnAmu. A manishI hAyigA batukutUnE vunnADu.

    paina vudAhariMchina vALLaki samarthakulu lErA? vALLEmaMTAru? “I sAhityakArula asalu jIvitAlu mAkeMDukU? vAru rAsiMdi mAtramE chUstAM” ani sannAyi rAgAlu tIstAru. iMkA gaDusu samarthakulaitE, “vILLa guriMchi telisinavannI nijAlE ani gEraMTI EmiTI? EmO, avi nijAlu kAvEmO? mIrEmannA chUSArA? mI daggara rujuvulunnAyA?” ani mannE dabAyistAru. chAlA maMdi ayitE, “EmOnaMDI! mAkavEvI teliyavu” ani tappiMchukuMTAru.

    adIgAka nItulu rAsEvAri charitralu chAlA maMdiki nijaMgAnE teliyavu. telisinA paTTiMchukOru. “sigareT kAlchEvADu itarulaki kAlchoddani cheppakUDadA? A alavATu valla jarigE hAni anubhavistunnADu kAbaTTi, itarulaki cheppagalugutunnADu” ani moMDigA vAdistAru koMta maMdi mahAnubhAvulu.

    idaMtA chUstE, kappala takkeDa vyavahAramE gurtostuMdi. “Edi nItI, Edi avinItI? annI kAlAnni baTTi mArutU vuMTAyi” ani aDDagOlugA mATTADE sUDO pheminisTulU, sUDO kamyUnisTulU kUDA vunnAru.

    iMtakI cheppochchEdEmaMTE, viplav gAru cheppiMdi karekTE ayinA, prastuta samAjaMlO Ayana cheppiMdi jaragaDaM lEdu. avinIti parulu nIti guriMchi sAhityaMlO pogalu kakkutUnE vunnAru!

    - je.yu.bi.vi. prasAd

  19. #Kameswara Rao # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 26, 2008 9:30 am

    #padELLugA #e#grUpullO uMDi chUsina sAdhAraNa vishayaM okaTuMdi. okarEdO vishayaM mIda oka pOsTu vEstAru, dAniki saMbaMdhiMchina TaiTilEdO peTTi. adi sisiMdrIlA vEsina chOTa uMDakuMDA dAnishTaM vachchina diSalO, ishTaM vachchina rItilO bhUmyAkASAllO saMchariMchaDaM modalupeDutuMdi. dAMtO kAsta telivunna vALLu A pOsTu TaiTulu mArina vishayAniki aNuguNaMgA mArustU uMTAru.
    alATi saukaryamikkaDEmainA uMTE I vyAsaM TaiTilu arjaMTugA mArchEyAlsina avasaraM unnaTTu nAku gaTTigA anipistOMdi :)

  20. #Sai Brahmanandam Gorti # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 26, 2008 11:02 am

    #I mATalO “dIpAvaLi” bAguMdi.
    mATala tUTAlU, sisiMdrI kAmeMTlU ( konni tussu maMTAyi), “AhA OhO” tArAjuvvalU, “#Y-D-N-K-A”# mArku lakshmI bAMbulu, venaka nuMDi evaru vEsArO telIni chImaTapAkAyalU, madhyalO soMta gOla “tussu” brAMDu chichchu buDlU, “bhajana” mArku matAbAlU, ilA rakarakAla bANA saMchAlatO I “dIpAvaLi” saMchika nachchanivALLuMTArA?

    ( saradAki rAsiMdidi. dayachEsi mI bANAsaMchA vachchE dIpAvaLiki dAchaMDi. :) -

  21. #ravikiran timmireddy # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 26, 2008 1:53 pm

    #I mATa vAriki oka manavi. mIrelA gA “ImATa rachayitalu” lO rachayitala parichayaM yistunnAru kAbaTTi, dAMtOpATE rachayitala guNa gaNAla parichayaM kUDA istE bAvuMTuMdani nA abhiprAyaM. machchuki rachayitaki eMtamaMdi bhAryalu lEka bhartalu vunnAranE vivarAlu. akkaDatOnE AgErA lEka iMkA iddaru muggurini kaTTukunE, peTTukunE AlOchanalEvannA vunnAyA. vALLE kAka iMkA bayaTi vyaktulatO vALLa saMbaMdhAlu. vALLani paMchukOgaligE avakASAlu. vALLu bhAryala, bhartala (eMtamaMdi mIda vokaTE sAri chEtulaigaligitE aMtamaMchidi) bhujAlamI chEtulEsi tIyyiMchukunna phoTo vokaTi vIlaitE. rachayita maMchi kamyinishTu, kAMgrEsu, janasaMghavA, lEka cheDDa kamyunishTu, kAMgrEsu, janasaMghavA. vILLu maMtrAlu valliMchE deyyAlA, lEka EvI valliMchani dEvatalA. phul Taim dayyAlA, lEka mUn laiTiMg dayyAlA. vILLa sUDO kamyunisTu, sUDO pheminishTula naMbar (0-10 skElu). ityAdi samAchAraM ImATa pAThakulaki labhyamaitE, ika pAThakula ishTA ishTAlani baTTi (rachayita guNagaNAlakanuguNaMgA)rachanalni chadavagaligE avakASaM kalugutuMdani nA manavi. kAnI jarigipOvalasina anarthaM jarigE poyyiMdi kadA ani nA bAdha. prasAdu gAri guriMchi teliyakuMDAnE, kanIsaM telusukOvAlanE AlOchana lEkuMDAnE Ayana kathalu chadivESAnE ippuDelA rA bhagavaMtuDA (kharma Ayanni kUDA trAsulO pETTAli kAmOsu).

    kAmESvararAvu gAru chakkaTi vishayaM cheppEraMDI.

  22. pAmarti satyanArAyaNa abhiprAyaM:

    #August 26, 2008 2:28 pm

    #je yu bI vI prasAdugAru rAsiMdi chadivina tarvAta nAku paina rAlph vAlDO emersan* cheppina mATalu gurtukochchAyi.

    nItini valliMchE vALLani eppuDU bhItitO chUDAli.

    :))

    puruguluMDE mEDi paMDu kannA pachchi araTi kAyE nayaM. koMpa dIsi nEnu ippuDu cheppina reMDu mukkalu kUDA nIti vAkyAlEnA EmiTi? tasmAt jAgrata jAgrata@h.

    namaskAramulatO

    pAmarti satyanArAyaNa
    *“#The louder he talks of honor, the faster we count our spoons.” — Ralph Waldo Emerson

  23. #koDavaLLa hanumaMtarAvu abhiprAyaM:

    #August 26, 2008 8:49 pm

    #rachayitalu, SrIraMganItulu

    idi je.yu.bi.vi. prasAd gAri abiprAyaMpai nA spaMdana. pAtikELLa kritaM AMdrajyOtilO anukshaNikaM sIriyal chivarakostuMDagA, pAThakulatO praSna-javAbula muchchaTa mugistU, vaDDera chaMDIdAs anna mATalu gurtukochchAyi:

    “chAlA maMdi pAThakulu nA guriMchi (‘parsanal’ vishayAlu) aDugutU vochchAru. mIru mI navalalO kulAlanu kulAlugA spashTaMgA chitriMchAru kadA. mIdi yE kulaM. mI soMta kulAnni mIru E vidhaMgA chitriMchArO telusukOvAlanuMdi / mI bhArya chanipOyinappuDu “himajvAla”, prEyasi chanipOyinappuDu “anukshaNikaM” rASAraTa kadA / mIru kanverTeD krisTiyannaTa kadA / mI jIvitaMlO kulatatvAla paTla mIru E vidhaMgA pravartistU vochchAru / mIru tirugubOtaTa kadA / mIdi kulAMtaramaTa kadA / mIru tikkamanishaTa kadA / mIru dEvuDilAMTivAraTa kadA / mIru avivAhitulaTa kadA / mIku iddaru bhAryalaTa kadA / mIru brahmachArulaTa kadA, yilA yennO. vATiki vETikI javAbu livvalEdu. nachchitE nA rachana chadavaMDi. nA jIvitAnni alA vuMchaMDi. nA rachananI nA jIvitAnnI alA vuMchaMDi. nA rachananI nA jIvitAnnI kalipi pariSIliMchatagina rachayitanaitE aMduku yiMkA vyavadhi vuMdi….

    aitE. nA jIvitaM – aMdulO alpatvAlunnA mahatvAlunnA asahyatalunnA abhinaMdanIyAlunnA abhiSaMsanIyAlunnA nA jIvitaM nA jIvitaMgA yadhAtadhaMgA pariSIliMchAlsina vELa vostE AnADu tappaka alA yadhAtadhaMgA labhyamavutuMdi.”

    chaMDIdAs lAMTi rachayitalu arudu. kAni Ayanannadi aMdarikI vartistuMdanukuMTAnu. yaMDamUri, SrISrI, SivAreDdi, pasaMd reDDi (?) – vALLa rachanalu asalu muMdara chadavadaggavO kAvO pariSIliMchaMDi. chadavadaggavi kAkapOtE, vALLa jIvitaM lO keLLaDaM vyarthaM. chadavadaggavE kAka, unnatamaina rachanalaitE, vALLa jIvitAllO keLLaMDi. vAri alpatvAlani bayalparachi vATi mUlaMgA okappuDu viluvainavanukunna rachanalu ippuDu pAThakulu eMduku visiri pAreyyAlO vivariMchaMDi. veMTanE pAThakulalO mArpu vachchi samAjaMlO nItI nyAyaM perugutAyanukOnu gAni, mI AkrOSAniki mAtraM sAhitI gauravaM labhistuMdi.

    koDavaLLa hanumaMtarAvu

  24. #baabjeelu # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 27, 2008 9:50 am

    #yiplavubAbU,
    ollakunnAvETI? rAtrEla rAmmaMdiraM kADa kUkOni kaburlADIvOllaMdarnI yI rochchu lOki lAgiMdi nuvvu kAdETi? nAnA, nuvvA?
    marayitE, muchchaTETaMTE, nAnrAsina “vAkyaM” lO nAnanukanna “TOn #&# Tenar” nAnanukunnaTTu “prehAdu” bAbukinipiMchanEdu. aMdukE alA bejjarillipOnADu.
    adAbAbu tappukAdu. adi nA tappE. eMdukaMTE rAsina vAkyaM aMdarikI adE bhAvAnnivvAli. yivvakapOtE rAsininODidi tappu.
    “kreDibiliTI” ni nuvvE jAruDubaMDaMTAvu. “adI nijamE” anikadA nuvvu rAsiMdi. nAnU voppEsukunnAnugadA?
    “kreDibiliTI” guriMchE, yiplav bAbU, iTAlakiMchu,dInikETaMTAvu?
    yEmana pajjAlu manavaMdarivI saduvukunnAM, mana pillalasEta kaMTatA paTTiMchestannAM. yEmannodileddAvA bAbU? eMdukaMTE, A bAbu A pajjAlu rAyakamuMdu manlATODE gadA? aMta seMDAlaM manishi alATi kaburlADitE manlATOLLaM vopputAvETi? mAlATOLLavoppinA, nuvvU “prehAdu” bAbU vopputArETi?mana pillalni manaM kAnukOvA? yEmanalATODiki mana pillalni voppagiMchestAvA? yEmana manakaMTA “bEvArsA”, manaM yEmana kaMTA “bEvArsA?”. A bAbu sEsina jalsAlu nuvvu sEsEvA? nAnu sEsEnA? “prehAdu” bAbu sEsEDA? A voyisulO”jalsAlu” seyyaDaM “tappu gAdehe” anaMTAvA? marETi sEstE tappu. mareppuDu sEstE tappu. marODu sEsiMdi tappA voppA seppaDAniki nuvveDivehe?” anaDigIvOLLaki nuvvETaMtAvu?
    nijAyitI aMTE ETO chariggA telInOLLaMdaraM mEM. nIti guriMchETaMTAM?
    nijAyitIni dATi, nItikADikeLipOyinODu, “prehAdu” bAbu.
    ilA vollakuMDipODaM annEyaM yiplav bAbU. lEdU, “apIsu” panlO yIlu dorakka ETI anlEdaMTAvA? yIlu dorikEkE seppu. seppIdEdO sariggA seppu. nijAyitItO seppu. A yenaka nItitO seppu. aMtegAnI vollakOku.
    eMdukaMTE, “ChaMdassU” migilina vATi guriMchi koTTuku Chastunna mammalni I “jAruDubaMDa” vyavahAraMlOki lAgiMdi mIru. pApaM “prehAdu” gAru, AyannoggeddAM. mIrETaMtAru?
    okaTi mAtraM nijaM. mAlATi kaDupu niMDina vALLu, nIti guriMchI, avinIti guriMchI, ‘chaMDIdAs” cheppinaTlu, AMdhrajyOti lOnE, nijAyitIni dATEka kadA seyyAla.
    deyyAlu vEdAlu (maMtrAlu kAdu, yiplav bAbU) valliMchaDavaMTE, nuvvU, nAnU chEstunnadi. aunaMTAvA? kAdaMTAvA?

  25. #Sai Brahmanandam Gorti # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 27, 2008 10:33 am

    #hanumaMtarAvu gAriki,

    vyaktigata vishayAlU,vyaktitvAlU reMDU vErvEru. mIru Inavala mI prEyasi pOyinappuDu rAsAraTa kadA annadi vyaktigata vishayaM. kulaM guriMchi sudIrgha upanyAsAlu istU kAsT phIliMg chUpaDaM vyaktitvaM. E rachanayinA bAguMdanipistE AyA rachayitalaguriMchi ArA tIyaDaM sahajaM. appuDappuDu I vyaktigata vishayAllO vyaktitvAlu kUDA vaddannA bayaTakostAyi. vATitOnE
    ( rachayitalatOnU, vAri rachanalatOnU) pAThakulaki pEchI!
    nEnu nAku nachchiMdi rAstAnU, nA jIvitaM nA ishTaM / nachchitE chaduvu / lEdA vadilEyi / rachannI, rachayita jIvitAnni kalipichUDaddu / ani rachayitE cheppaDaM ( mukku sUTi vyavahAraMlA kanipiMchachchu ) eMtavarakU sababu? E rachanayinA rAsEvALLa dRkpathAnni baTTE kadA vachchEdi? soMta anubhavAllOchO lEdA pakkavALLa jIvitAllAMchO rachanalu puDatAyi. vITini yathAtathaMgA rAyaDaM vEru. vErE dRkpathaMlO cheppaDaM vEru. reMDU okaTi kAdu. appuDE rachayita vyaktitvaM bayalpaDEdi. chEtilO sigareTTu veligiMchi, poga trAgaDaM ArOgyAniki hAnikaraM ani cheppaDaMlA uMTuMdi. nAstikulu purANa kathani chebitE cheppina dAnastitvAnni praSniMchE hakku pAThakulakuMDadA? nAguriMchi kaLLu mUsukO. vastuvunE chUDu ani chebitE eMtamaMdi oppukuMTAru?
    nenu SrI SrI dEvuNNi nammarani vinnAnu. Ayana anEka bhakti DabbiMg sinimAlaki rachanalu chEsAru. nEnu mUla rachanani yathAtathaMgA rAsAnaMtE – rAyaDaM nA vRtti – nammakaM vEru – jIvanOpAdhi vEru anani SrI SrIyE cheppaDaM DabAyiMpulA kanipistuMdi kAnI saMjAyishI avadu. ikkaDa vyaktulU, vyaktitvamU, vastuvU vErvEru gA chUDDaM kudarani pani.
    bahuSA je yu bi vi gArikI ( nAkkUDA ) dInitOnE abhyaMtaraM anukuMTAnu.

  26. viplav abhiprAyaM:

    #August 27, 2008 1:06 pm

    #mai Diyar bAbjIlu,

    jAruDubaMDa mIda kAlEstE EmavutuMdO telisI, peddagA paTTiMchukOni rachayitalu manaku kAvAlani evarainA kOrukuMTE ‘chadivE samAjaM’ paridhi peragAli. manamunna bAvi, kAdu iMkuDu guMta, lOMchi kanIsaM talainA paiketti prapaMchAnni chUddAM ani chadivE vALLakuMDAli. chadivE vALLaku arhata avasaraM annadi koMtavarakU karekT. adi eTlAMTi arhata anEdaggarE koddi pEchIlu. vATini tIrchaDAniki koMta arhata kaligina vALLE rAyAli. vATi mIda maLLI chadavaTAniki, rAyaTAniki “kvAliphai” ayina vALLE kAvAli.

    vishayaM tIvrabaDi, chikkabaDDappuDu arhata anEdi mukhyamavutuMdi. koDavaLLa kOT chEsina, Ayana phEvaraiT rachayita mATalu A dAMTlOkE vastAyi. adi DipheMD chEyagaligE mATa.

    vishayAnikunna tIvratanu rachayitakannA arhata kaligina pAThakuDE bAgA grahistADEmO ani nA anumAnaM.

    ika maLLI okasAri muMduniMchE modalu peDitE:

    sarE, mIranna rAyaTAniki arhata akkarlEdu annadi “ChaMdassu guriMchI, lakshaNa graMdhAlu chadavaDaM guriMchI, nannayAdi kavula kAvyAlani aupOsana paTTaDaM guriMchI vagairAla guriMchi” ayinA kUDA AyA vishayAlaku unna tIvrata E arhatA lEni vALLaku telavadu, rAyalEru. (telustuMdani, rAyagalarani mIku anipistE, “prUphulu kAvAli” bAbjIlu gArU aMTAnnEnu :)). “telavaTaM” oka arhata.

    idi guDipATi aDigina “mana kavulu aksharAsyulEnA!” daggarikE tIsuku rAvachchu. lEdA “eTochchI rAsE vALLa arhata tOnE pEchI” ani rAjA SaMkar gAranna daggarE modalu peTTochchu. “kaviki kAvalasina kanIsa arhata guriMchi kavulE cheppAli” ani nEnU oka pedda sArunu talchukuni ippaTi maTuku vadiliMchukOvachchu. ivi rAyaTAniki nAkEM arhata uMdI ani nannE aDigitE mAtraM javAbu “adi chadivE vALLu DisaiD chEyAla”ni cheppaTaM tappa marO mATa lEdu.

    arhata kaligini chadivE vALLu, rAsE vALLa arhatanu nirNayistAru ani marOvidhaMgA cheppochchEmO, mana AMjanEya svAmi guDimeTla mIda — cheppukunE vishayaMgA. “rachchabaMDa” ayitE mAtraM iMkA spashThaMgA cheppAlsi uMTuMdi.

    asalu nEnu rAsiMdi venakku tIsukuMdAmanukunnAnu. kAnI kAlu peTTiMtarvAta adi tIyaTaM kashTaM anipiMchi mATlADalEdu. oka kAlE kadA ani UrukuMTE ippuDu reMDOdi kUDA peTTi chUDamannaMduku mIku dhanyavAdAlu.

    ika muMdukeLLi, migatAvi kUDA chUddAM:

    (vITini peddagA kAMTeksT lO peTTi, aMTE venakkeLLi, bhUtaddaM apputechchukuni, chUDakaMDi, dEnikadE annaTTu chadavaMDi, vIlaitE)

    “rAsina vAkyaM aMdarikI adE bhAvAnnivvAli. yivvakapOtE rAsininODidi tappu.” kAdu, chadivE vADi arhata ikkaDa praSnArdhakaM.

    “nijAyitItO seppu. A yenaka nItitO seppu. aMtegAnI vollakOku.” vollakuMtAniki nAnEvannA peMDli sEsukunna sItAlnA! avusaravaitE ayidAruguriki okka sArE gureTTi, okala sigalokalaku muDiveTTi kotta bhAratavEdainA puTTi chastuMdEvO ani sUsE vODiki idEM lekka?

    nItulu cheppaTAnikE kAni vinaTAniki bAguMDavu ani evarO peddatalakAya anagA vinnAnu. nijAyitI anE arhata mAtraM Edi rAyAlannA kAvAli.

    vEmana guriMchi “aMta seMDAlaM manishi alATi kaburlADitE manlATOLLaM vopputAvETi?” ani aDiginaMduku: kAlAnni, prAMtAnni baTTi ‘nIti’ mArutuMdi. ‘nijAyitI’ mAradu. ivAlTi nIti rEpuMDaka pOvachchu. nEnu rAsina oka bEvArs eksAMpul ‘nijAyitI’ guriMchi, nIti guriMchi kAdu. mana daggara (ippaTikI) padi padamUDu EMDla pillalanu peMDlIlu chEsukunE vALLunnaru, vALLaMtA ChailD mAlesTarsE marO prAMtapu nItini baTTi chUstE. aTlAMTi kvAliphikEshans kAkuMDA, nijAyitI guriMchi mAtramE nEnu rAsiMdi.

    nijAyitI marO arhata rAyaTAniki.

    selav.

    viplav

  27. #ravikiran timmireddy # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 27, 2008 2:17 pm

    #ikkaDa vyaktulU, vyaktitvamU, vastuvU vErvEru gA chUDDaM kudarani pani.
    bahuSA je yu bi vi gArikI ( nAkkUDA ) dInitOnE abhyaMtaraM anukuMTAnu.

    maMchidi nItimaMtulArA, mahA prasthAnAnni viSAkha samudraMlOki visireyyaMDi, guyernikAni kAlcheyyaMDi. akkaDatO AgakaMDi, prAchIna kaLA kArulu, sAhitIkArulEM maDi kaTTukOni kUrchOlEdu vAri chitrAlni, rachanalni saitaM samidhalu chEseyyaMDi. aitE voka manavi A maMTa velugulO mIvenaka bhAgAlu mAtraM evarikI kanapaDakuMDA kappi peTTukOMDi, lEkapOtE evarO mimmalni kUDA A maMTallOki dOSeyyagalaru.

    nItulu cheppaDaM sAhityaM kAdu. bratukuni chitriMchaDaM sAhityaM. A jIvita chitraNa evari kalaMnuMchostEnevi. akshrara rUpaM tIsukunna A aMtaraMga vuppena ki dAnikaMTU voka asthitvaM ErpaDutuMdi. rachayitatO sRshTikartatO saMbaMdhaMlEni vyaktitvaM A rachanaki abbutuMdi. rEkhA mAtraMgA rachayita rachanalO kanipaDochchEvO #but by itself it will be an independent entity. Like any of us who inherited a few characteristics from our parents. Still we grow up to be independent human beings and we will not and do not want to be judged by personalities of our parents.# rachanalu, rachayitala madhya kUDA adEvidhavaina saMbaMdhaM vuMdani nA nammakaM.

  28. koDavaLLa hanumaMtarAvu abhiprAyaM:

    #August 27, 2008 11:30 pm

    # nammakAlu – bratukuteruvu

    sAyi gAriki,

    chaMDIdAs anna mATa chAlA sababayinadE kAdu, udAttamainadi kUDA. muMdu tana rachanani chadavamannADu. adi viluvainadayitE, tanu nalugurU telusukOdagga rachayitayitE, tana jIvitaM – dAMTlO alpatvAlunnA mahatvAlunnA – aMdari muMdarA peDatAnannADu.

    rEpO mApO chaMDIdAs svIyacharitra veluvaDitE, Ayanoka yOgilA bratikADani telistE, anukshaNikaM viluva O pisaru peragochchu. bhrashTuDanipistE O pisaru taggochchu. kAni maulikaMgA navala viluvalO mArpuMDadu. uMTE manaM sAhityAnni velakaTTaDAniki vADE tUnikarALLani tanikhI cheyyAli.

    SrISrI bhakti rachanalu jIvanOpAdhi kOsaM rASAnanna samarthana dabAyiMpu gAnU lEdu, saMjAyishI gAnU lEdu. kaThOramaina vAstavikatatO kUDi uMdi. mahAprasthAnaM tOnO viplava rachanalatOnO vachchE DabbutO poTTa gaDustuMdaMTArA? gaDavakapOtE EmAye, “satul, sutul, hitul pOtE pOnI, … tiTlU, rATlU, pATlU rAnI,” anna kaLA ravi, A mAtraM nijajIvitaMlO ATupOTlaki taTTukOlEnivADu, kavitvaM, kAkarakAyA rAyaDameMduku aMTArA?

    nAstikulu purANakathani cheptE praSniMchE hakku pAThakulakuMDochchu. koDavaTigaMTi kuTuMbarAvuki nivALularpistU chalasAni prasAdarAvu chaMdamAma nirvAhakulu samarpiMchina SraddhAMjalini prastAviMchAru:

    “tana viSvAsAlu, nammakAlU elAMTivainA chaMdamAma pAThakula kOsaM Ayana viSEshamaina kRshi chEsi, sEkariMchi, aMdajEsina prAchIna itihAsAlU, paurANika gAthalU, A SailI maruvarAnivi. svargIya SrI chakrapANi ASayAlaku rUpaM kalpiMchi, tana SailitO pAThakalOkAnnI, takkina patrikalanU AkarshiMchina mEdhAvi SrI kuTuMbarAvu.”

    aMTE kuTuMbarAvu tana nammakAlatO saMbaMdhaMlEni rachanalaki merugulu diddE paniki aMkitamayyEDanE kadA! eMduvalana? ani chalasAnE kuTuMbarAvuni sUTigA Ayana bratikuMDaganE aDigAru:

    “mIru – nEnU okE vRttilO unnAM. eDiTar girI anEdi oka vRtti. batukuteruvu. manaM eDiTarlagA kAka E AphIsar gAnO, lekcharar gAnO, byAMku udyOgigAnO vuMTE, AphIsulO manaM chEsE pani guriMchigAnI, dAni svabhAvaM guriMchigAnI evarU praSniMcharu, vimarSiMcharu. kAnI, eDiTar anIgAna aMdarU atanu panichEsE patrikalOni bhAvAlanniMTikI atannE bAdhyuDigA bhAvistAru, vimarSistAru. mIru chaMdamAma lO vEsE kathala svabhAvaM guriMchi, vATilO rAkshasulu, bhUtAlu, dayyAlu, dEvuLLu munnagu vATilO gala auchityAnni guriMchi chAlA maMdi praSnistunnAru…. dInini mIru elA samarthistAru?” (rasana, pEjI 133.)

    kuTuMbarAvu dIniki samAdhAnaM ivvalEdu kAni, nEnUhiMchukOgalanu – kuTuMbarAvukI pOshiMchAlsina kuTuMbamokaTuMdi. SrISrI, kuTuMbarAvu, iMkA anEkamaMdi, poTTapOshaNa kOsaM tama nammakAlatO pUrtigA kAkapOyinA koMtayinA posagani panilO uMDi uMDochchu. vALLu tama nammakAlani vadileyyAlA? lEka vErE bratukuteruvu chUsukOvAlA? mIrayitE EM chEstAru?

    koDavaLLa hanumaMtarAvu

  29. #Srinivas Nagulapalli # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 28, 2008 11:32 am

    It is unfair to take a dig at Vemana’s past. He wrote padyams after, not before, overcoming his past. Same thing with Valmiki et.al.

    # SrISrI bhakti rachanalu upAdhikOsaM rAsAnu anaDaM vAstavikatanE kAka atani nijAyitIni kUDA chepputuMdi. ayitE I charcha kEvalaM rachanalu, rachayitalakE parimitaM chEyaDaM anyAyaM!

    “tiTToddu, koTToddu, (lEdA mIkishTamochchina tappidAnni irikiMchaMDi)
    ani chepputU, nuvvu avvE chEyochchu, kAni nEnu avi chEstE tappEMTi nAnnA” ani anaDaM, vinaDaM teliyani vArevvaru! mATaku, chEtaku adE saMbaMdhaM. chEta manishi vyaktittvaM ayitE mATalu A vyakti rachanalu kAvachchu.
    tappidAlaguriMchi kAdu, voppidAla guriMchi ayitE kUDA idE paristhitA ani aDugochchu.

    aMdariki telisina katha gurtukochchiMdi.

    gAMdIjI daggaraku oka talli biDDanu tIsukochchi vIDiki chakkera ekkuva tinoddani cheppamani vEDukuMdaTa. talli eMta cheppinA vinalEdu kAbaTTi gAMdhIjI daggaraku tIsukochchiMdi Ayana chepitEnannA viMTADEmO ani ASatO.

    EmuMdi! ippuDu kAdu, vAraM rOjulayiMtaruvAta tirigi rammannAraTa gAMdhIjI. maLLI vAraM taruvAta veLLitE, gAMdhIjI pillavADini prEmatO daggaraku chErchukoni chakkera ekkuvagA tinaku ani cheppADaTa. I mAtraM mukka cheppaDAniki vAraM taruvAta eMduku rammannAru ani A talli ADigiMdaTa. vAraM rOjula kritaM varaku nEnu kUDA chakkera ekkuvagA tinEvADini. nEnu taggiMchina taruvAta ippuDu cheppAnu ani vivariMchADaTa gAMdhIjI. katha kaMchiki.

    rachayita akAraNaMgAnO, sakAraNaMgAnO, okari dukANaMkOsamO,lEka savAlakshala kAraNAlatO rAyochchu. eMduku rAyakUDadu? aMdaMgA, adhbhutaMgA kUDA A rachanalu rAvochchu. avArDulu kUDA poMdochchu. ayitE nijAyitI lOpiMchE rachanalu A talli cheppina maMchi mATallAgAnE migilipOtAyEmO.

    nijAyitItO cheppina mATalu pedda rachayitavi ayinA kAkapOyinA, avArDulu rivArDulEvi vachchinA rAkapOyinA, asalu rAyaDaM chadavaDaM kUDA rAni vADivainA kUDA guMDeku tagulutAyi. mArpuku Upiri istAyi.

    vidhEyuDu
    -#Srinivas

  30. mOhana # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 28, 2008 12:13 pm

    #rachayitala pErulanu tolagiMchi vAri “maMchi” rachanalanu
    mana muMdu evarainA uMchitE, aMdulO E rachana
    nijAyitI unna rachayita rAsiMdi, E rachana nijAyitI
    lEni rachayita rAsiMdi anE vishayAnni cheppaDaM sulabhaM
    kAdanukoMTAnu. rachayita durbaluDugA uMDavachchu,
    aMta mAtrAna ataDu (Ame) rAsina rachanalu AdarSavaMtamugA
    eMduku uMDarAdu? rachayita vyaktigata jIvitAniki
    A rachayita rAsina rachanaku laMke peTTaDaM sababu kAdu.

    vidhEyuDu – mOhana

  31. pAmarti satyanArAyaNa abhiprAyaM:

    #August 28, 2008 12:39 pm

    #nAku chaMdamAma pustakAlaMTE chAlA ishTaM. nEnu telugulO I mAtraM velaga beTTagalugutunnAnaMTE vATi tODpATu vallE nani oppukOka tappadu.

    hanumaMtarAvugAranna mATalu chadivAka nAku evari TI sharTu mIdO chadivina vAkyaM gurtukochchiMdi. “#Please take my advice. I don’t use it anyway!”

    #vAru “nammakAlu bratukuteruvu” anna SIrshika kiMda rAsina vishayAlu nammadaginaTTE vunnAyi. kAnI manamu ilA kUDA AlOchiMchavachchEmO!

    oka sthUlakAyuDO sthUlakAyurAlO nEnu mI baruvu taggistAnani ArbhATaMgA EdainA patrikalO prakaTana ichchAranukuMdAM. dAniki prajala spaMdana elAvuMTuMdi?

    alAgE manamu konni sArlu TIvI lO chUstU uMTAmu. EdO oka iMdraluptakuDu itarula kESasaMpadanI sauMdaryAnnI peMpoMdistAnani (saMkOchaM EmAtramU lEkuMDA) anargaLaMgA vyAkhyAniMchi nishkramistAru. adi elA vuMTuMdi?

    sthUlaMgA uMDaTamO, baTTatala kaligi uMDaTamO aparAdhAlu kAvu. nEnu kUDA koddigA sthUlaMgAnU, baTTatalatOnU vunnAnani anukuMTunnAnu. :-)

    kAnI ilAMTi prakaTanalakI vyAkhyAnAlakI prajalu elA spaMdistArO adE vidhaMgAnE rachayitala rachanalakkUDA spaMdistArani UhiMchaDaM asamaMjasaM kAdanukuMTAnu.

    ikapOtE nammakAlanU, svabhAvAlAnU sulabhaMgA kappipuchchavachchu. tama tama ASaya AkAMksha, nammakAlaku vyatirEkaMgA rachayitalu tama rachanalanu sAgiMchavachchu. rachayitalaMdarU nItimaMtulugA uMDAlannadi lEdu.

    jaiLLallO kUruchuni rAsE/rAsEsina rachayitalu lErA?

    evari ishTaM vAridi. evari jIvitaM vAridi. rachayitalu bhrashTulatE abhyaMtaraM cheppavalisina avasaraM uMdO lEdO nAku teliyadu. lEdanE nEnanukuMTunnAnu. rAyaDaM savyaMgA vastE chAlu. chetta rachanalaki vela eMtainA ekkuvE, viluva eMtainA takkuvE ani vErE cheppavalasina avasaraM lEdani anukuMTunnAnu.

    vArEmi rAsinA dAni gatO durgatO nirgatO nirNayiMchaDAnni pAThakulE chUsukuMTAru.

    mari chivari vishayaM. rachayitalalO reMDu rakAlu. telivaina vArU, telivitakkuvavAru. adElAgA pAThakulu kUDA reMDu vidhAlu. telivaina vArU, telivitakkuvavAru.

    rachayitalaMdarU telivaina vAraitE bAdha lEdu. alAgE pAThakulaMdarU telivaina vArainA bAdha EmAtramU lEdu.

    pAThakulu koMdaru mAtramE telivaina vALLaitE rachayitalu bhrashTulainA nItimaMtulainA okkaTE. aTuvaMTi pAThakulu chadivina pratidAninI vichakshaNA dRkpathaMtO chUchi tamaku nachchinadi mAtraM ErukuMTAru. migilina chettani visarjistAru.

    ika pOtE migilinadi buddhitakkuva pAThakula vishayaM.

    pAThakulu buddhi hInulaitE buddhihInula rachanalanE samarthistAru. avE vAriki nachchutAyi. vAru chAdastapu moguDu chebitE vinaDu gillitE EDustADu anna dhOraNilO uMTAru. vAriki EmI cheppakuMDA, vArini ekkaDA gillakuMDA uMTE E bAdhA lEdu.

    iMdulO iMkO vichitraM EmiTaMTE telivitakkuva vAriki telivigalavALLu telivitakkuva vALLugA kanipistAru. telivigalavALLaki telivi takkuvavAru telivitakkuva vArugAnE kanipistAru.

    aMTE oka vidhaMgA aMdarU telivitakkuva vALLE. iMkO vidhaMgA aMdarU telivigalavALLE. kAbaTTi assalu bAdhE lEdu.

    mIrevarainA cheppE muMdE oppEsukuMTAnu. nEnu telivi takkuva vANNEnu.

    namaskAramulatO

    pAmarti satyanArAyaNa

  32. #Srinivas Nagulapalli # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 28, 2008 5:22 pm

    #chakkagA satya gAru satyAnnE cheppAru.

    iMkokka AlOchana. rachayita vivarAlEmI teliyakuMDAnE rachananu AdarSavaMtaM ani anukunnaTlE, rachayita naDavaDi telisiMtaruvAta, adi rachana yokka pradhAnAMSAniki pachchi viruddhaMgA unnappuDu, ayyO rachana aMdiMchina AdarSaM rachayitakE eMta dUraMgA uMdi anukoni, A rachana yokka AdarSa sphUrtitOnE A rachayitanu saitaM bErIju vEsukOvaDaM sahajamU, samaMjasamE anukuMTAnu. aMtamAtrAna rachana guNAlu taggAyani kAdu. rachana chUpiMchE velugutOnE rachayitanu kUDA niggudElchi, spashTaMgA chUDaDaM mAtramE.

    idi kEvalaM rachana, rachayitalakE parimitaM ayina vishayaM kAdani kUDA anipistuMdi. eTuchUstE aTu aMtaTA unna vishayamEnEmO!

    ekarAlakekarAlu bhUkabjAlu chEsi, gajAlakoddi mAtraM guDikO, AsupatrikO virALaM ivvaDaM, praSaMsanIyamA, “vichAra”NIyamA! bhArIgA pannulu eggoTTi, prabhutva niyamAlanu nElarAsi, prakRti upadravAlochchinappuDu pradhAna maMtri #relief fund# ku konni paisalivvaDaM goppanA, dAruNamA! iTlA ennO!

    Adhunika telugu sAhitIlOkaMlOnE mana muMdunna oka pramukha udAharaNa. SrI mADugula nAgaphaNi Sarma gAri avadhAna praj~nanu, pAMDitini praSaMsiMchina abhimAna saMghAlu, saMsthalE Ayana vyaktigata aMSAlanu telusukunnAka AyanalOni kaLAkauSalAnni dUraM nuMchi mAtramE aMdukOvaDAniki muMdukurAvaDaM chUstunE unnAM. dUraMgA uMchiMdi rachananu, kaLanu kAdu, rachayitanO, kaLAkArunnO mAtramE. idi EdO nA abhiprAyaM kAdu, kaLLeduTunna vAstavaM.

    vidhEyuDu
    #Srinivas

  33. Srinivas Nagulapalli # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 28, 2008 5:31 pm

    #satya gAru cheppina dAMTlO chinna asatya muMdi.
    adi vAru telivi takkuva ani cheppukOvaDaM.
    satya gAru kshamistArani ASistU
    vidhEyuDu
    #Srinivas

  34. baabjeelu # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 28, 2008 11:50 pm

    #bAbbAbu, aMdarU vokka siTaM AgaMDi,
    manaM mATADIdi, “cheMdassu” kANNiMchI, “sTAMDarD” bAsa kANNiMchI “chailD mOlesTars” mIMchI iMkO yEpella kuMDA sUsIsukuMdAM.
    “cheMdassu”:
    sAlA seppukunI, bOrukoTTiMdaMdarikI, mukhyaMgA chadivIvALLakI, bAgA chaduvukunnOLLakI.
    “sTAMDarD” bAsa:
    dAnikI goDavETI lEdu.
    ayitE rAsina vAkyaM aMdarikI adE bhAvAnnivvAli, yivvakapOtE rAsinODidi tAppu ani nAnu rAsiMdAniki. (bAbjIlu uvAcha ani rAyakUDadu. kaLLupOtAy. nAlATivALLu, telisina vArani nEnu nammina vALLu cheppinavATikI, mAkannI telusu ani vAriki vArE nammI vALLu cheppinavATini mAtraMmE “uvAcha” lanAli.) viplav bAbu uvAcha:..kAdu chadivEvADi arhata praSnArthakaM.??????
    “nIti”: peddalu cheppinivi AlakiddAM.
    jeyubivipi uvAcha:
    “Edi nItI, Edi avinItI? annI kAlAnnibaTTi mArutUvuMTAyi” ani aDDagOlugA mATTADE sUDO pheminisTulu, sUDO kamyUnisTulU vuMTAru.
    viplav bAbu uvAcha:
    kAlAnnI, prAMtAnnI baTTi nIti mArutuMdi. nijAyitI mAradu.
    “arhata”:
    viplav bAbu uvAcha:”idi rAyaTAniki nAkEM arhata vuMdI ani nannE aDigitE mAtraM javAbu “adi chadivEvALLu DisaiD cheyyAlani cheppaTaM tappa marOmATa lEdu. “marOmATacheppu” ani manaM mArubEraM cheyyakuMDA teggoTTIsEru.
    peddalaMdarU cheppiMdE. chadivIvOLLu, muMdugA, rAsinadAni arhata ni DisaiD chEstAru. dAni arhata marI ekkuvagAvuMTE “evarrAsEraMDI?” ani modaleDatAru. “kAMTeMpararI” ayitE appuDu nissaMdEhaMgA kavi nijAyitI, Ayenaka nItI valla appaTidAkA “loTTalu” yEsukuni chadivinA “chEdu” gA mArochchu, lEdA “arhata” marI perigipOvachchu. vudAharaNaki “ataDu aDivini jayiMchADu” guriMchi EvaMTAru ani “voka peddAyanani” aDigitE, “A pasuvula DATru EdO vaidyaM chEsukOka kApI kathalU avI eMduku? alATi vATi guriMchi nEnu mATlADanu” annAru.
    iMkO uvAcha viplav bAbudE arhata guriMchi: telavaTaM oka arhata.
    batuku teliyAli aMtE, marETI telakkarlEdu. eMdukaMTE ippuDevarU “prabhuvulni” hITekkiMchaDAnikO, lEdA prabhuvu “naDuM paTTIsiMdayyA kavI, pAMDraMga mahachchevO, marOTO, saduvu reMDrOjulu” aMTE “hITu” taggaDAniki “vastA vaTTidE, pOtAvaTTidE” modaleTTakkarlEdu. modaleTTinA tappukAdu, batakaDaM kOsaM kAbaTTi. “rasana” 133 pEjI kALLa mIda paDitE tappakuMDA budhdhostuMdi, budhdhijIvulaki kUDA.
    “nijAyitI”:
    viplav bAbu uvAcha: nijAyitI marO arhata rAyaTAniki
    dikkumAlipOyina I bUmmIda, evarEpani chEsinA, nijAyitO chEstEnE rANistuMdi.
    nijAyitI, rAsEvALLaki O “DOsu” ekkuvuMDakkarlEdu.
    Akharavuki “kshavaraM” chEsE vADukUDA nijAyitI tO chEstEnE, girAkI. EdO vohalA “DekkI” vODu “O kshavarAniki, iMkO kshavaraM phrI” annA evarU paTTiMchukOru.

    mATa manniMchi, “jAruDu baMDa” mIda reMDO kAlu kUDA peTTina viplav gAriki dhanyavAdamulu. “I mATa” rachchabaMDa kAdani mIrE annAru. avanivvaM ani mA aMdari tarapuna nEnu mATistunnAnu. sUstU, sUstU, chEjEtulA, subbaraMgA vunna I mATa ni “yUpI”, “EpI”, “Tien” lEdA maroha dAMdO “aseMblI” lAgA cheyyanivvaM.
    viplav bAbU marika mIru selavu tIsukOvachchu.

    SrInivAs nAgulapalli gAriki: nEnu rAsina “vEmana” vudAharaNa lO, vEmana ni kAnI, vEmana padyAlani kAnI kiMchaparacha lEdu.

  35. #Bhushan # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 29, 2008 1:03 am

    #SrIraMganItulu cheppEvALlu doMgadArulu dUrochchu. manaku nIti kathalu rAsEvALlu avinItigA vuMDochchu. tAnE AchariMchalEnidAnni itarulakeMduku cheppAli? deyyAlu vunnaTTu AdyaMtaM katha rAsina rachayita Akharna tana juTTulOni veMTrukalni chEtabaDi chEsEvALLakevarikainA paMpiMchaDAniki reDI aMTADu. kathalOni maMchini samarthiMchEvALlu, kathakuLlOni cheDDani khaMDiMchakapOtE appuDu eTu vaipuna vunnaTTu? ilA abhiprAyAnnicheppina je.yu.bi.vi.gArU, sAyibrahmAnaMda gortigArU, mI daggara mahAprasthAnAlu vuMTE vATini mahAsamudraMlO visireyyAlsina pani lEdu gAnI, alAMTi rachayitala vyaktigatajIvitAla kuLLuni vimarSiMchi tIrAlsiMdE. lEkapOtE chAlAmaMdi pAThakulu, A rachayitala kathallAgE, kavitallAgE vALLani kUDA vuttamulanukunE pramAdamuMdi.

    bhUshaN
    #nagabhushanamr@hotmail.com

  36. Sai Brahmanandam Gorti # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 29, 2008 6:06 am

    #hanumaMta rAvu gArU,

    mIru
    “chaMDIdAs anna mATa chAlA sababayinadE kAdu, udAttamainadi kUDA. muMdu tana rachanani chadavamannADu. adi viluvainadayitE, tanu nalugurU telusukOdagga rachayitayitE, tana jIvitaM – dAMTlO alpatvAlunnA mahatvAlunnA – aMdari muMdarA peDatAnannADu.” ani rAsAru. chaMDIdAs lA dhairyaMgA cheppE rachayitaleMta maMdunnAru? kAkapOtE sAdhAraNa pAThakulu haMsalu kAru. vyaktinI, rachannI, vyaktigata siddhAMtAlanI dEnikadi vErvErugA tUkaM veyyaru. veyyalEru.
    alAgE rachayitalaMdarU nItI, nijAyitI maDibaTTa kaTTukoni rachanalu chEstArani nEnukOnu. cheppE siddAMtAlakI, nItulakI, tAnu chEsE panulakI poMtana lEkuMDA uMTE rachayita nijAyitI mIda nammakaM elA kalugutuMdi?
    mIru kuTaMbarAvu gAri udAharaNa cheppAru. mIru cheppinaTlugA kuTuMbarAvu gArikI O kuTuMbaM uMdi. dAni pOshaNA bAdhyatA uMdi. aMdukOsaM patrikA saMpAdakulugA Ayana nammina siddhAMtAlani pakkanabeTTi, AyanakappagiMchina panini adbhutaMgA chEsAru. kAdananu. Ayana mIda nammakaMtO O bAdhyata appagistE, iMtakaMTE goppagA evarU chEyalErannaTlugA chEsi chUpiMchAru. adi Ayanaki panimIduMDE gauravAnni chUpistuMdi.
    ( telugu vAru garviMchadagga vyaktAyana. Ayana nA abhimAna kathakullO okaru. )
    ikkaDa nAdO udAharaNa. O nAstikuDu dEvAlaya bOrDulOnO, lEdA dAniki saMbaMdiMchina O panikO niyamiMpa baDi, adi chEyachchu. dAnnevarU praSniMcharu. kAnI adE vyakti purOhituDigA udyOgaM chEstU, nEnu dEvuNNi nammanu kAnI paurOhityaM nA jIvanAdhAraM aMTE evarU EM chEyalEru. kAkapOtE adEmiTi iMta virudhdhaMgA vuMdA vyaktitvaM anipiMchaDaM sahajaM. alAMTappuDE nijAyitI anEdi bayaTakostuMdi. kAdaMTArA?
    nEnEmI dharmavyAdhuLLAMTi vANNi kAnu. aMduvalla nAkU mAmUlu pAThakullAgE anipistuMdi.
    rAtri pIkala varakU pItallA tAgi tellArEsariki maMchi maMchi rachanalu chEyachchu. nAkEmI abhyaMtaraM lEdu. tAgubOtu rAsADaMTU A rachanni arEbiyA samudraMlO visirEyanu. evari alavATlu vALLavi anUrukuMTAnu. nA dRshTilO alavATlU vEru. vyakti tvaM vEru. maMchigA rAstE chadivi AnaMdistAnu. kAnI -A rachayitE “tAgaDaM tappu, dInivalla prajalaki maMchidi kAdaMTU nIti vAkyAlu vALLa rachanallO chuTTEsEDanukOMDi. appuDE chirrettukostuMdi. alAMTi rachayitaMTE nAku gauravaM lEdu. adE nAkunna abhyaMtaraM.
    nAku nammakaM lEni vishayAlu nEnAchariMchalEnu. nA pillalakI cheppalEnu. nEnu nammE siddhAMtAlaki vyatirEkaMgA jIvistU, avi vALLaki nUripOyanu. ( kamyUnishTu siddhAMtAlanu nammutU, bi je pi lO panichEyalEnu :)- )
    mIru namminA, nammakapOyinA idE chEstAnu.

  37. pAmarti satyanArAyaNa abhiprAyaM:

    #August 29, 2008 1:06 pm

    #ayyallArA, ayyayyallArA! (ammalaMdarU Eri?)

    jIvitAnni chitriMchaDaM mAtramE sAhityaM ayitE jEkE rauliMg rAtalu sAhityaM kAdu. avi abhUtakalpanalu kanuka. adE vidhaMgA kathAsaritsAgaramU, paMchataMtra kathalU kUDA sAhityaM kAvu. ekkaDainA jaMtuvulu mATlADatAyA? AlOchiMchi manushyullA vyavaharistAyA?

    manamu AchariMchEdE kathallO rAyAlani tIrmAniMchukuMTE avi mana chEtulaki manamE toDukkunna saMkeLLavutAyi.

    kathalu kalpitAlu. Atma kathalu kalpitAlu kArAdu. I reMTikI chAlA tEDAlu unnAyi. Atma kathallO rachayitala jIvitAlanu chitriMchaDaM jarugutuMdi. nijAnnI, nijAyitIni pradarSiMchaDaM jarugutuMdi. nammakAlU, saMdEhAlU teliyajEyabaDutAyi. alA jaragani pakshaMlO avi vimarSanArhAlavutAyi.

    AtmakathallOnO, nijamani chATiMchabaDi prachuriMchabaDina rachanallOnO vAstavikata lOpistE nissaMdEhaMgA vimarSiMchaMDi. kallA kapaTaM kanipistE khaMDiMchaMDi.

    koDavaTigaMTi gAru prati bEtALa katha aMtaMlOnU “kalpitaM” ani rAsEvAru. kAvAlaMTE pAta chaMdamAmalu tiragavEyaMDi. tarvAta bhAvyamani anipistE vimarSiMchaMDi. aMtE kAdu. chaMdamAmalO vachchina E okka kathanU tanadigA chATukunnaTlu lEdu.

    Atmakathalaku uMDAlsina lakshaNAlanu itara sAhitya rachanalaku ApAdiMchavalasina avasaraM lEdu. itara sAhityaM annadi I viSAla prapaMchaMlO “jIvitAnni chitrIkariMchaDaM” anna kugrAmapu paridhi lOpala chera bAdhananubhaviMchanakkarlEdu. I vidhi ki balikAnavasaraMlEdu.

    kathalannavi, rAsE vAri nammakAlaku anuguNaMgA lEka pOyinA parvAlEdu. vAstavikataki dUraMgA unnA parlEdu. mIraMdarU nijAyitI, nIti, avinIti ani rachayitala vishayaMlO bAdhapaDaTaM avasaraM lEni panigA nAku tOstunnadi.

    I rachayita SrIraMga nItulu bOdhistunnADu (kathallO). chAlA maMchi pATalu pADEstunnADu. vIDi jIvita charitrani tavvudAM. avinItini baTTabayalu chEddAM. vANNi kapaTavEshadhAri ani nirUpiMchi vIdhi madhyalOki IDchi chIlchi cheMDADudAM. bhrashTuDanipiMchudAM. dhvajastaMbhAniki korata vEddAM anE lAMTi udrEka pUrita mATalu sababugA gOchariMchaTlEdu.

    namaskAramulatO

    pAmarti satyanArAyaNa

  38. #Sai Brahmanandam Gorti # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 29, 2008 2:01 pm

    #pAmarti gArU,

    ikkaDa E rachayitanI chIlchi chaMDADaDaM lEdu. praSniMchE vALLa pIka nokkaDaM lEdu. sIma sinimAllO lAgA kattulu nUraDaM lEdu. aMdulO tappEmiTi? evarni evarU tUlanADaDaM lEdu. nIkEM telIdu, nE cheppEdi vinu anna dhOraNi aMtakannA lEdu. “prakarsha” pErutO eduTi vALLani chulakanagA chUDDaM lEdu. evari abhiprAyAlni vALLu giri dATakuMDA chebutunnAraMtE! udvEgAlU, udrEkAlu aMtakannA lEvu :)- okavELa evarainA “cheyyi” jAritE, saMpAdakula kattera chUsukuMTuMdi. kAbaTTI, dvArakAnagaramu dAri baTTI annaTlugA charchiMchukO vachchu. :)-

  39. koDavaLLa hanumaMtarAvu abhiprAyaM:

    #August 29, 2008 11:43 pm

    #sAyi gAriki,

    mI purOhituDi udAharaNa nAkarthaM kAlEdu. kuTuMbarAvudi udyOgadharmamU, SrISrIdi marokaTInA? elA? iddarU batukuteruvu kOsaM tama nammakAlatO koMta rAjIpaDinaTluMdi. mahAkavulU, mEdhAvulU kUDA rAjI paDitE elA? ani dharmajIvulaDagochchu. kAni, rAjIpaDakapOtE, mana samAjaMlO alAMTi nammakAlunnavALLaki sarayina AstipAstuluMTE tappa illu gullavachchu. EM? A mAtraM tyAgaM cheyyalErA? aMTE, EmO, adi kaDupulO challa kadalani nAlAMTi vALLu cheppaDaM dharmaM kAdu.

    parimitamaina nA sAhitI paridhilO chaMDIdAs lA dhairyaMgA cheppE rachayitalevvarU lEru – chalaM tappa.

    mIru “sAdhAraNa pAThakulu haMsalu kAru. vyaktinI, rachannI, vyaktigata siddhAMtAlanI dEnikadi vErvErugA tUkaM veyyaru. veyyalEru,” annAru. mIrE samarthiMchina prasAdu gAri AkraMdana – prajalu vErvErugA tUkaM vEstunnAranE gadA?

    haMsalaMTE chalasAni prasAd rAsina “anaMtaM” muMdumATa gurtochchiMdi: “E musugulU, dAparikAlu lEkuMDA unnadunnaTTu rASADu SrISrI. … miMgalEni chEdunijAlU, vinalEni saMgatulU, chUDalEni dRSyAlU … EdiEmayinA prajalu haMsala lAMTivAru…”

    sAmAnya pAThakulaki haMsalatO kAstO kUstO chuTTarikaM lEkapOtE, anaMtaM veluvaDina pAtikELLa tarvAta kUDA mahAprasthAnaM eMduku nilustuMdi?

    sAdhAraNa pAThakuDainA, goppa mEdhAvi ayinA, tanu mechchina drashTa nija jIvitaMlO bhrashTuDani telistE, hatASuDavutADu. saMdEhaM lEdu. kAni atani panitanaM goppadayitE dAnini pUrtigA tiraskariMchalEDu.

    (nEnI lAMg vIkeMD ni sadviniyOgaparachukuMTE, vachchE vAraM alAMTi oka drashTa guriMchi nA kaMpyUTiMg vyAsaMlO chadavachchu. vishayaM, saMdarbhaM, mana rachayitalatO pOlchadaggadi kAdu kAni nEnu paina anna dAniki O udAharaNa.)

    koDavaLLa hanumaMtarAvu

  40. pAmarti satyanArAyaNa abhiprAyaM:

    #August 30, 2008 5:31 am

    #sAyi gAriki:

    bAbbAbu, nA saMdESaM lOni chivari pErAni Eri pArEsi migilinavi chaduvukuMdurU. mIku puNyaM vuMTuMdi. akkaDa kAstaMta kavi hRdayAnni pradarSiddAmani prayatniMchAnu. kshamiMchaMDi. :)

    hanumaMtarAvu gAru ilA annAru:

    sAdhAraNa pAThakuDainA, goppa mEdhAvi ayinA, tanu mechchina drashTa nija jIvitaMlO bhrashTuDani telistE, hatASuDavutADu. saMdEhaM lEdu. kAni atani panitanaM goppadayitE dAnini pUrtigA tiraskariMchalEDu.

    dInitO nEnu EkIbhavistunnAnu. nEnu sAdhAraNa pAThakuNNE. Askar vailD EkavAkyAlu (#one-liners)# nAku bAgA nachchEvi. A tarvAta atani jIvita charitraku saMbaMdhiMchina oka pustakaM techchi chadivitE telisiMdi atanni reMDu saMvatsarAlu appaTlO oka cheppukOdagani nErAniki cherasAlalO peTTArani.

    adi chadivi hatASuNNayyAnu. kAnI atani vAkyAlu nAku ippaTikI nachchutAyi. atani nEraM (?) EmAtramU nachchadu. :-)

    namaskAramulatO

    pAmarti satyanArAyaNa

  41. #ravikiran timmireddy # abhiprAyaM:

    #August 30, 2008 8:13 pm

    #satyannArAyaNa gAru,
    jIvitAnni chitriMchaDaM sAhityavaMTE, jIvitaMlO kalpana lEdani kAdaMDI. batukulO vAstavaveMta nijavO, kalpanA aMtE avasaraM. kalpanE lEkapOtE mana bAlyaMlO voka atyadbhutavaina kalani, A kalatO mamaikavaipOyina A batukuni pArEsukOvaDavE kadA. kalpanA, kalE lEkapOtE yavvanaM eMta nissAraMgA nIrukAripOtuMdO mIku telIdA, nAku telIdA. nElanodili konnisArlu pagaTi kalallO prayANaM anubhavaM lEni manishaMTU evarainA vuMTArA. jIvitAnni chitriMchaDavaMTE ekkAlatOpATU, EDEDu samudrAla avatalanunna mArricheTTu to~r~ralO chilaka guriMchi kUDA cheppaTaM aMDI. aMdukani lekkala mAsTAru eMta nijavO, egirE gurravekkina rAkumAruDu jIvitaMlO aMta avasaravE. maraMdukani batukaMTE, navvulU, EDpulU mAtravE kAdaMDI, kalalU, kalpanalU kUDA vuMTAyani manavi.

    hanumaMta rAvugAru, sAyi gAru,
    vokavELa saraina AstipAstuluMDi, batukulO pOshaNakOsaM rAjIpaDavalasina avasaraM lEkapOtE, appuDu A rachayitalu tappulu chEstE vALla rachanalaki A tappulaMTutAyA? kaDupulO challakOsavainA, oMTlO vEDi kOsavainA tappu, tappE kadaMDI. aitE tappu chEsina vALLakI, tappu chEsE vALLakI batukulO kashTaM, sukhaM anubhaviMchE arhata lEdA? A anubhavAnni cheppukunE avakASaM vALlaki lEdA? manushulugA vALLani manaM nettina peTTukuni tiragakkaralEdu, kAnI kavulugA, rachayitalugA, kaLAkArulugA vALla sRshTini kiMchapachavalasina avasaraM vuMdA? voka vELa vALla oLLu kovvekkE tappulu chEsunnA, A tappulni vALLa rachanalaki ApAdiMchAlsina avasaM vuMdA? chaMDI dAsu gArikunnaMta dhairyaM lEni rachayitalu, balahInulu, vyasanaparulu, trAgubOtulu, vyabhichArulu, rAjakIyanAyakulu (?) vILLevarikI kasTAnnI, sukhAnnI, EDupuni, navvunI, kannILLanI, prEmanI, nijAnni, kalpannI, vALLu nammina nijAnnI (vALlakadi AcharaNa sAdyaM kAkapOvachchu) kAgitaM paina peTTE arhata lEdA.

  42. koDavaLLa hanumaMtarAvu abhiprAyaM:

    #August 30, 2008 10:06 pm

    #ravikiraN gArU,

    mIraDigina praSnalaki mIvI nAvI samAdhAnAlu okaTigAnE uMTAyi – maniddari abhiprAyAlani chUstE. marO vidhaMgA anipistE, adi nA vAdanalO lOpaM. rachayita jIvitaMtO pramEyaM lEkuMDA rachanaki prAdhAnyata ivvAlani nishkarshagAnE cheppAnu.

    koDavaLLa hanumaMtarAvu

  43. #Geddapu Lakshmi Prasad # abhiprAyaM:

    #March 24, 2010 8:10 am

    #abhiprAyAlannI chadivAnu.savinayaMgA oka vishayaM cheppAlanipiMchi cheppE dhairyaM chEstunnAnu. manaM ennanukunnA EmanukonnA okaTi mAtraM nijaM. manaki nachchiMdi maMchidi. manaM dakkiMchukOlEnidi manaku dakkaMdi cheDDadi. mana arhatanibaTTi mana manastattvAnni baTTi manaku arThaM ayyEdi maMchidi, arthaM kAnidI arthaM chEsukOlEnidI cheDDadi. idi maMchi, idi cheDu anEvi sArvajanInAlU kAvu, sArvakAlikAlU kAvu.ayA kAlAllO AyA prAMtAllO AyA vyaktulu tama mAnasika paripakvatA sthAyulanu baTTi, vividhAMSAlanu darSiMchi vATini svAbhiprAyanuguNamUlyAMkaNaM (#value judgement)# chEstAru. anniTinI AyA kONAllOnE darSiMchi AsvAdiMchE vAru dhanyulu. itarulu anyulu.

    AvO bhadrA@h kratavOyaMtu viSvatA@h

    mI
    lakshmI prasAd geDDApu

  44. #Lakshmi Prasad Geddapu # abhiprAyaM:

    #March 27, 2010 2:04 pm

    #reMDELLu paTTiMdi. oka vishayAnni vividha kONAllO viSlEshiMchina mitrula manassullOni mUlAlanu avagataM chEskOvaDAniki. oka rOjulO alavOkagA abhiprAyAlanu cheppEyagalgaDaM chAlA maMdiki alavATayinaTlugA nAkalavATukAkapOvaDaM nA balahInata. dAniki nannu kshamiMchaMDi.

mI abhiprAyaM teliyachEyaMDi

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